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You work for an international company and want to resign your job Explain Why you want to resign When you plan to leave What you liked about the company v.2

You work for an international company and want to resign your job Explain Why you want to resign When you plan to leave What you liked about the company v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to let you know that I had decided to leave this prestigious organization by the end of next month. Let me explain in more detail. I have got another job opportunity at a managerial level where I would be responsible to handle the entire recruitment department across the MEA region. In addition to that, I would have a team of a total of 5 employees to manage, and I believe this role would help me to polish my leadership skills at an advance level. I understand that the company has the policy to tender one month' s notice in advance. Therefore, I would like to submit my resignation with 30 days’ notice per the company’s standard, thence my last working day would be 30 December 2020 in the organization. I must say that Parsons is one of the best origination in the region as it has built a huge reputation among employees because of its friendly policies, competitive pay rates, and career path for them. Please acknowledge the receipt of the letter, and let me know the name of the person you want me to handover the work. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best Regards,
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to
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let
you know that I had decided to
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leave
this prestigious organization by the
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end
of
next
month.

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Let
me
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explain
in more detail. I have
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got
another job opportunity at a managerial level where I would be responsible to handle the entire recruitment department across the MEA region.
In addition
to that, I would have a team of a total of 5 employees to manage, and I believe this role would
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help
me to polish my leadership
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skills
at an advance level.

I understand that the
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company
has the policy to tender one
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month&
#039; s notice in advance.
Therefore
, I would like to submit my resignation with 30 days’ notice per the
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company
’s standard, thence my last working day would be 30 December 2020 in the organization. I
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must
say that Parsons is one of the best origination in the region as it has built a huge reputation among employees
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because
of its friendly policies, competitive pay rates, and career path for them.

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Please
acknowledge the receipt of the letter, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know the name of the person you want me to handover the work.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Best Regards,
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter You work for an international company and want to resign your job Explain Why you want to resign When you plan to leave What you liked about the company v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
205 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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