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You have decided to leave your job, write to your employer the following- why you want to leave- when you are planning to leave- What did you like on your job v.2

You have decided to leave your job, write to your employer the following- why you want to leave- when you are planning to leave- What did you like on your job v. 2
Dear Mr. Ahmed, I am writing to let you know that I have decided to resign from your organization because u have received a better job offer from a multi-national company with a well-paid salary. Which means a high quality of life to me and my family. According to my contract with your corporate, it mentioned that the notice period is one month from the notification day. Nevertheless, I would like to spend two months to initiate and complete the hand over process, so please suggest the person to start immediately. I will wait for this information in your reply email. I have some positive comments about your company. Firstly, however, the low salaries policy that you are following with your employees, you promote your workers to work safely as well as providing safe and reliable equipment, besides maintaining a safe workplace. Secondly, the issue that encouraging me at the beginning to join your firm, the teamwork spirit between the workers and that has helped me a lot in learning the job responsibilities fast and increased my career experience. I hope the best for you and your company in the future. I will wait for your confirmation on my resign. Best regards
Dear Mr. Ahmed,

I am writing to
let
you know that I have decided to resign from your organization
because
u have received a better job offer from a multi-national
company
with a well-paid salary. Which means a high quality of life to me and my family.

According to my contract with your corporate, it mentioned that the notice period is one month from the notification day.
Nevertheless
, I would like to spend two months to initiate and complete the hand over process,
so
please
suggest the person to
start
immediately. I will wait for this information in your reply email.

I have
some
positive
comments about your
company
.
Firstly
,
however
, the low
salaries
policy that you are following with your employees, you promote your workers to work
safely
as well
as providing safe and reliable equipment,
besides
maintaining a safe workplace.
Secondly
, the issue that encouraging me at the beginning to
join
your firm, the teamwork spirit between the workers and that has
helped
me a lot in learning the job responsibilities
fast
and increased my career experience.

I hope the best for you and your
company
in the future. I will wait for your confirmation on my
resign
.

Best regards
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You have decided to leave your job, write to your employer the following- why you want to leave- when you are planning to leave- What did you like on your job v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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