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there has been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved write a letter to your manager in your letter describe the complaints that have v.2

there has been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved write a letter to your manager in your letter describe the complaints that have v. 2
Dear Mr. Sharma, Last week, you have ordered me to provided suggestions for making changes to our office' s front desk area and i am writing in response to this order A number of complaints have been made by our clients who have come to our office to visit us. they say that there is no proper reply to them from our front desk officer. Also, the clients feel that there are less number of chairs available in the reception. The telephone in the reception desk is under repair and due to the presence of our receptionist once in a blue moon, clients find it difficult to make enquiries. Though many of our clients went back furiously, a few have left feedback in the register placed on our reception desk. The reception area is essential because, that is the place where clients get answer for their queries and clients have to be directed to the concerned officers only in the reception. Since, reception is the frontmost place in the office, a client' s impression about our office is developed in his mind as a result of how he is treated by our receptionist. In order to develop our reception, the first step ought to be taken is to change the receptionist. If our clients are given proper details through phone regarding the documents that must be brought to our office, it will be easy for them to approach us. Henceforth, the telephone should be repaired first. It is even more good to change the telephone to an intercom which connects to all other staffs in the office. Finally, there must be an increment in the number of chairs in the front desk area. I hope the above mentioned suggestions will be taken into consideration. Yours sincerely, Gayathri Das.
Dear Mr. Sharma,

Last week, you have ordered me to provided suggestions for making
changes
to our
office&
#039; s front
desk
area and
i
am writing in response to this order

A number of complaints have
been made
by our
clients
who have
come
to our
office
to visit us. they say that there is no proper reply to them from our front
desk
officer.
Also
, the
clients
feel that there are less number of chairs available in the
reception
. The telephone in the
reception
desk
is under repair and due to the presence of our receptionist once in a blue moon,
clients
find it difficult to
make
enquiries
. Though
many
of our
clients
went back
furiously
, a few have
left
feedback in the register placed on our
reception
desk.

The
reception
area is essential
because
,
that is
the place where
clients
get
answer for their queries and
clients
have to
be directed
to the concerned officers
only
in the
reception
. Since,
reception
is the
frontmost
place in the
office
, a
client&
#039; s impression about our
office
is developed
in his mind
as a result
of how he
is treated
by our receptionist.

In order to develop our
reception
, the
first
step ought to
be taken
is to
change
the receptionist. If our
clients
are
given
proper
details
through phone regarding the documents that
must
be brought
to our
office
, it will be easy for them to approach us. Henceforth, the telephone should
be repaired
first
. It is even more
good
to
change
the telephone to an intercom which connects to all other staffs in the
office
.
Finally
, there
must
be an increment in the number of chairs in the front
desk
area.

I hope the above mentioned suggestions will
be taken
into consideration.

Yours
sincerely
,

Gayathri
Das
.
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25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS letter there has been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved write a letter to your manager in your letter describe the complaints that have v. 2

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  American English
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298 words
6.0
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