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You are currently working for a prestigious company and happy with everything. However, a far better opportunity has come your way and you have to leave your current job and move abroad. write a letter to your current employer, in your letter you must int v.2

You are currently working for a prestigious company and happy with everything. However, a far better opportunity has come your way and you have to leave your current job and move abroad. write a letter to your current employer, in your letter you must int v. 2
Dear sir or Madam, I am Harry Martin, software engineer working with your prestigious organisation from last seven years. With due respect, please accept this letter as my resign application as I have received a better job opportunity from another IT company. I will serve the notice period of one month starting from today. Firstly, I am truly grateful to your organisation for the commendable experience and knowledge that I gained worked here. It would definitely help me in my future job. I also thankyou for acknowledging and appraising my efforts from time to time. My new job title is Senior project manager and my responsibilities involves managing an offshore as well as onsite team of fifty members. I will take project requirements from the clients and ensure timely delivery of the same. I am very excited to face the new challenges. Although, I have got an incredible opportunity to work in America and earn handsome salary but I have mixed feelings. I am upset for leaving such a great company where the employee' s policy were very friendly and rewarding. I would always miss the professional work environment and cooperative staff members. I hope you will be happy with my new work offer and release me with all the paper work on 22nd june. Yours Sincerely, Harry Martin.
Dear sir or Madam,

I am Harry Martin, software engineer working with your prestigious
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organisation
from last seven years. With due respect,
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please
accept this letter as my
The word 'resign' is not a noun. Did you mean "resignation"?
resign
application as I have received a better job opportunity from another IT
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. I will serve the notice period of one month starting from
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today
.

Firstly
, I am
truly
grateful to your
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organisation
for the commendable experience and knowledge that I gained worked here. It would definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me in my future job. I
also
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thankyou
for acknowledging and appraising my efforts from time to time. My new job title is Senior project manager and my responsibilities involves managing an offshore
as well
as onsite team of fifty members. I will take project requirements from the clients and ensure timely delivery of the same. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
excited to face the new challenges.

Although, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
an incredible opportunity to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in America and earn handsome salary
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I have mixed feelings. I
am upset
for leaving such a great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
where the
Possible spelling mistake found.
employee&
#039; s policy were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
friendly and rewarding. I would always miss the professional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
environment and cooperative staff members.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you will be happy with my new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
offer and release me with all the paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
on 22nd
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june
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Harry Martin.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS letter You are currently working for a prestigious company and happy with everything. However, a far better opportunity has come your way and you have to leave your current job and move abroad. write a letter to your current employer, in your letter you must int v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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