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You are working in a international company. You want to quit your this job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should say: Why you want to quitWhen you want to leaveWhat you liked about the company. v.2

You are working in a international company. You want to quit your this job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should say: Why you want to quitWhen you want to leaveWhat you liked about the company. v. 2
Dear Mr John, I am writing to request and inform you about my job resignation, due to my higher education as I have already discussed with you. To elaborate, you have been a great mentor to share all my interests and ideas. I have applied for a scholarship to do higher education in Human Resource Management in Sydney, Australia. Luckily, I have my seat confirmed, so, unfortunately, I need to leave this organisation. As the course starts by December third week, I must be there within a fortnight. This would be helpful for me to settle down with good accommodation near to the college. Consequently, I have to get relieved by November last week. Furthermore, it is really hard to be away from such a great conglomerate, where I have learned all new technologies and strategies to handle complex issues. Moreover, it is a place where the convenience of the employee has revered a lot which I got admired. I would like to request you for the confirmation of the last date of my working as soon as possible. Thank you for being considerate. Yours Faithfully, Ms. Valli
Dear Mr John,

I am writing to request and inform you about my job resignation, due to my higher education as I have already discussed with you.

To elaborate, you have been a great mentor to share all my interests and
ideas
. I have applied for a scholarship to do higher education in Human Resource Management in Sydney, Australia. Luckily, I have my seat confirmed,
so
, unfortunately, I need to
leave
this
organisation
.

As the course
starts
by December third week, I
must
be there within a fortnight. This would be helpful for me to settle down with
good
accommodation near to the college.
Consequently
, I
have to
get
relieved by November last week.

Furthermore
, it is
really
hard
to be away from such a great conglomerate, where I have learned all new technologies and strategies to handle complex issues.
Moreover
, it is a place where the convenience of the employee has revered a lot which I
got
admired.

I would like to request you for the confirmation of the last date of my working as
soon
as possible. Thank you for being considerate.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Ms.
Valli
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter You are working in a international company. You want to quit your this job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should say: Why you want to quitWhen you want to leaveWhat you liked about the company. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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