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You have been working for a company for more than a few years and have decided to leave the company Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company In your letter explain what you have learned while working for the company v.2

You have been working for a company for more than a few years and have decided to leave the company Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company In your letter explain what you have learned while working for the company v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to formally notify you that I am resigning from the position of Sr. Planning Engineer effective from 1st May. I would like to express my gratitude for six wonderful years I have spent with you. It was a joyful journey for me to work in such esteemed organization. The company has offered me plethora of opportunities to develop my career and skills. The knowledge I have gained in this organization during my tenure of work is priceless and added a feather to my professional career. I have also enjoyed support and guidance of my seniors, coworkers and management had been like family to me. Sadly, all good things comes to an end, and now I think I need to take one step forward. From my engineering days I always had a dream to complete post-graduation from the reputed university. That dream has come true, as I got admission in one of the most reputed university " Michigan University" in USA to study Masters in Project Management. Even though it is difficult for me to leave this company and my colleagues, but I don’t want to miss an opportunity to live my dream, as I believe completing post-graduation from such a reputed university will give me an edge to my career growth. I once again like to thank you for offering me all possible support and guidance during my tenure of work in this organization. Yours faithfully, Rakesh Soni
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
formally
notify you that I am resigning from the position of Sr. Planning Engineer effective from 1st May. I would like to express my gratitude for six wonderful years I have spent with you.

It was a joyful journey for me to work in such esteemed organization. The
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company
has offered me plethora of opportunities to develop my career and
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skills
. The knowledge I have gained in this organization during my tenure of work is priceless and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
a feather to my professional career. I have
also
enjoyed support and guidance of my seniors, coworkers and management had been like family to me.

Sadly
, all
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good
things
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comes
to an
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end
, and
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now
I
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think
I need to take one step forward. From my engineering days I always had a dream to complete post-graduation from the reputed university. That dream has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
true, as I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
admission in one of the most reputed university
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; Michigan
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;
A determiner is probably missing here: "in the USA".
in USA
to study Masters in Project Management.
Even though
it is difficult for me to
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leave
this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and my colleagues,
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but
I don’t want to miss an opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
my dream, as I believe completing post-graduation from such a reputed university will give me an edge to my career growth.

I once again like to thank you for offering me all possible support and guidance during my tenure of work in this organization.

Yours
faithfully
,

Rakesh
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Soni
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You have been working for a company for more than a few years and have decided to leave the company Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company In your letter explain what you have learned while working for the company v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
244 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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