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You are planning to take leave from office because of study reasons. Write a leave application to your manager asking to grant one month leave. In your letter, tell the reason of leave, who will replace you and how you are planning to keep up to date whil v.2

You are planning to take leave from office because of study reasons. Write a leave application to your manager asking to grant one month leave. In your letter, tell the reason of leave, who will replace you and how you are planning to keep up to date whil v. 2
Dear J, I am writing to request one month leave, which is required for me to better prepare for my IELTS exam. The exam is scheduled for March 2017 and I am conscious that I am not yet at the level I aspire to. I find it challenging to balance between the work and study. Therefore, I need a break from office. To keep abreast of the developments at work, I will check my office emails on a weekly basis. In addition, I would be available for our bi-weekly team meetings. As for my temporary replacement, I think Jane has the required level of experience and knowledge of my project. I am confident that she is the right person to keep the momentum and make the project a success. We have been working together for a number of years and you know that I always did my best to meet the business requirements. I would appreciate your understanding of my personal situation. I am happy to discuss what support I can give to ensure we keep the ball rolling while I am away. Regards, Aida
Dear J,

I am writing to request one month
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
, which
is required
for me to better prepare for my IELTS exam. The exam
is scheduled
for March
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
2017 and
I am conscious that I am not
yet
at the level I aspire to. I find it challenging
Did you mean "balancing"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
to balance
between the work and study.
Therefore
, I need a break from office.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
abreast of the developments at work, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
my office emails on a weekly basis.
In addition
, I would be available for our bi-weekly team meetings.

As for my temporary replacement, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
Jane has the required level of experience and knowledge of my project. I am confident that she is the right person to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the momentum and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the project a success.

We have been working together for a number of years and you know that I always did my best to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the business requirements. I would appreciate your understanding of my personal situation. I am happy to discuss what support I can give to ensure we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the ball rolling while I am away.

Regards,

Aida
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You are planning to take leave from office because of study reasons. Write a leave application to your manager asking to grant one month leave. In your letter, tell the reason of leave, who will replace you and how you are planning to keep up to date whil v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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