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You work for an international company and like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your lellerExplain why you want to work in the company's head office for six monthsSay how your wo v.1

You work for an international company and like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your lellerExplain why you want to work in the company's head office for six monthsSay how your wo v. 1
Dear Nick, I am writing to inform you regarding my desire to work in an overseas branch. I have recently done certification in AWS that ensure me to grab an opportunity to work in a branch located in the US. They are conducting training sessions along with given chance to work with them for six months. As this is the golden time to polish my skills so I wish to be there for the required period. I assure you in my absence, work would not be hampered as I already trained my assistant to perform all the task with ease. Also, I ensure that I will make all the proper arrangements to carry my work smoothly here without any hurdle. You are requested to arrange ticket fare and two days of accommodation there. I will highly appreciate your cooperation. Thank you for your consideration. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely Andrew
Dear Nick,

I am writing to inform you regarding my desire to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in an overseas branch. I have recently done certification in AWS that ensure me to grab an opportunity to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in a branch located in the US. They are conducting training sessions along with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
chance to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
with them for six months. As this is the golden time to polish my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I wish to be there for the required period.

I assure you in my absence,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
would not
be hampered
as I already trained my assistant to perform all the task with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
.

Also
, I ensure that I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
all the proper arrangements to carry my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
smoothly
here without any hurdle.

You
are requested
to arrange ticket fare and two days of accommodation there. I will
highly
appreciate your cooperation.

Thank you for your consideration.

Looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely


Andrew
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You work for an international company and like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your lellerExplain why you want to work in the company's head office for six monthsSay how your wo v. 1

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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