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Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward. mention what they have done to help the community. say what reward y v. 5

Dear sir, Subject: Regarding, reward people who do social services. This is Aslam from Sydney. Since last twenty five years, I have been living in this place. As per knowledge, the person named Mr. Zainul Abideen who is living in my place and whom I want to recommend for the reward. He is performing many social activities such as blood donation camp, orphan care, old ages home etc, . He is a well known person and doing these type of activities for the last thirty years. Apart from these, he wrote many books and did many lectures which is very useful for the community to lead in a decent life and a good habit as well. He is serving to the social community in day and night with smiling face. I suggest Mr. Zainul Abideen, who is eligible for the reward. I would like to give him a good car and in proportion. The car might be very useful for his service to move from one place to other. Though he does not have any transport to do the social activities. Hope, I suggest a right person. Yours truly, Mohammed Aslam.

IELTS letter Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward. mention what they have done to help the community. say what reward y v.5

Dear sir, Subject: Regarding, reward
people
who do
social
services. This is
Aslam
from Sydney. Since last
twenty five
years, I have been living in this place. As per knowledge, the person named Mr.
Zainul
Abideen
who is living in my place and whom I want to recommend for the reward. He is performing
many
social
activities such as blood donation camp, orphan care,
old
ages home etc
, .
He is a well known person and doing these type of activities for the last thirty years. Apart from these, he wrote
many
books and did
many
lectures which is
very
useful for the community to lead in a decent life and a
good
habit
as well
. He is serving to the
social
community in day and night with smiling face. I suggest Mr.
Zainul
Abideen
, who is eligible for the reward. I would like to give him a
good
car and in proportion. The car might be
very
useful for his service to
move
from one place to other.
Though
he does not have any transport to do the
social
activities. Hope, I suggest a right person. Yours
truly
, Mohammed
Aslam
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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9 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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