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Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course. v.5

Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course. v. 5
Dear sir, My name is Mohammed Aslam from India. I completed my bachelor of Electrical & Electronics engineering course on 2005 at Anna University. When I was in higher secondary school, I studied biology and mathematics as well. Now I planned to do the tertiary course to strength my engineering course and at the same time, I will get more opportunity in the job market nowaday. The tertiary infomation course is very essential for my career and it will boost up my points to achieve my targets. I believe TAPE course will be very helpful to understand the basic fundamentals in an Electrical Engineer Trainee in power industry. So I kindly request you to provide the valuable information about the Tertiary preparation certificate. I will be very thankful for this help and please do favor in this regard. Yours sincerely, Mohammed Aslam.
Dear sir,

My name
is Mohammed
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Aslam
from India. I completed my bachelor of Electrical
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&amp
; Electronics engineering
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course
on 2005 at Anna University. When I was in higher secondary school, I studied biology and mathematics
as well
.

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Now
I planned to do the tertiary
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course
to strength my engineering
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course
and at the same time, I will
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get
more opportunity in the job market
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nowaday
. The tertiary
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infomation
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course
is
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very
essential for my career and it will boost up my points to achieve my targets. I believe TAPE
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course
will be
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very
helpful to understand the
Consider using "fundamentals".
basic fundamentals
in an Electrical Engineer Trainee in power industry.

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So
I kindly request you to provide the valuable information about the Tertiary preparation certificate.

I will be
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very
thankful for this
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help
and
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please
do favor in this regard.

Yours
sincerely
,

Mohammed
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Aslam
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course. v. 5

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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