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An English speaking friend is coming to spend a week in your hometown. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: . offer to find a place to stay. give suggestions abut what to do in a week. . inform about the clothes to be brought. v.1

An English speaking friend is coming to spend a week in your hometown. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: . offer to find a place to stay. give suggestions abut what to do in a week. . inform about the clothes to be brought. v. 1
Dear Sarah Hope that this letter of mine finds you in a good health. I' m very excited as you are visiting to my hometown during your holidays as it' s been a long time since we last met. I' ve made all the plans for a week when you' re staying with me and penning all those in this epistle. You do not need to worry about your stay. I will find a hotel for you as there are many accommodations available nearby to my place at reasonable costs. On the day, when you' ll reach Shimla, we' ll go to the Ridge in the evening as it' s a nice place to admire the beauty of the nature. Next day, Indian Institute of Science and Technology would be a best place to place as it' ll whole day. On the third day of your stay, we' ll enjoy the traditional food of Shimla at Mall Road. Then for two days, we' ll go to Kufri which is a tourist place around 20kms from Shimla. I am not going to hear any excuse as you' re going to stay with my family at my house for the rest two days. And listen, at the time of your visit, weather would be cold so don' t forget to bring warm clothes. Waiting to see you. Give my best to everyone in your family. See you soon Malisa
Dear Sarah

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health.
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excited as you are visiting to my hometown during your holidays as
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#039; ve made all the plans for a week when
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you&
#039; re staying with me and penning all those in this epistle.

You do not need to worry about your stay. I will find a hotel for you as there are
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many
accommodations available nearby to my
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place
at reasonable costs. On the day, when
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you&
#039; ll reach
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Shimla
,
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we&
#039; ll go to the Ridge in the evening as
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it&
#039; s a nice
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place
to admire the beauty of the nature.
Next
day, Indian Institute of Science and Technology would be
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a
best
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place
to
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place
as
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it&
#039; ll whole day.

On the third day of your stay,
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#039; ll enjoy the traditional food of
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Shimla
at Mall Road. Then for two days,
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we&
#039; ll go to
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Kufri
which is a tourist
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place
around 20kms from
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Shimla
. I am not going to hear any excuse as
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you&
#039; re going to stay with my family at my
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house
for the rest two days. And listen, at the time of your visit, weather would be
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cold
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so
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don&
#039; t forget to bring warm clothes.

Waiting to
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see
you. Give my best to everyone in your family.

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See
you
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soon


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Malisa
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Mistakes

IELTS letter An English speaking friend is coming to spend a week in your hometown. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: . offer to find a place to stay. give suggestions abut what to do in a week. . inform about the clothes to be brought. v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
236 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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