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You were going to meet Liz, one of your international friends. Unfortunately, your plan have changed and you will not be able to meet at the arranged time. Write an email to inform her that you can not meet on the date, give the reasons and suggest a new v.2

You were going to meet Liz, one of your international friends. Unfortunately, your plan have changed and you will not be able to meet at the arranged time. Write an email to inform her that you can not meet on the date, give the reasons and suggest a new v. 2
Dear Liz, I am writing to inform you about my plan go to your city in 1st April. I find it very exciting because we have not met each other for ages. I really miss you and your family. How are Eric, Sumi and Amelia doing? I wish I could visit you and spend some quality time with you all, however, my fight has a technical problem so we took off for an hour later. Unfortunately, We continue to encounter bad weather and have to land immediately in Malaysia. Perhaps, in the night, I will sleep at the hotel near the airport and on the schedule, in morning tomorrow the plan will take off early and come to your city. Therefore, Maybe I' ll be late one day than the schedule. It would be grateful if you could pick me up at the airport at 9 A. M in 2nd April. Once again, I am sorry for this inconvenience. I hope not to interrupt your work. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Linh Bui
Dear Liz,

I am writing to inform you about my plan go to your city in 1st April.

I find it
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very
exciting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
we have not met each other for ages.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
really
miss you and your family. How
The singular proper name Eric must be used with "is".
are
Eric,
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Sumi
and Amelia doing? I wish I could visit you and spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
quality time with you all,
however
, my fight has a technical problem
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
we took off for an hour later.

Unfortunately, We continue to encounter
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
weather and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
land immediately in Malaysia. Perhaps, in the night, I will sleep at the hotel near the airport and on the schedule, in morning tomorrow the plan will take off early and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to your city.
Therefore
, Maybe
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I&
#039; ll be late one day than the schedule.

It would be grateful if you could pick me up at the airport at 9 A. M in 2nd April. Once again, I am sorry for this inconvenience. I hope not to interrupt your work.

Looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Linh
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Bui
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS letter You were going to meet Liz, one of your international friends. Unfortunately, your plan have changed and you will not be able to meet at the arranged time. Write an email to inform her that you can not meet on the date, give the reasons and suggest a new v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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