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You are planning a 2 day work training outside your city next month Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding accommodation arrangement for your visit In your letter you should tell 4 introduce yourself and your company 5 ask availability of th v.1

You are planning a 2 day work training outside your city next month Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding accommodation arrangement for your visit In your letter you should tell 4 introduce yourself and your company 5 ask availability of th v. 1
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter to make arrangements for the stay during our training session. My name is Gurjeet Kaur. I am working as a human resource manager in ABC Company. Our company deals with the mobile phones. Our company is organizing a training for the candidates of your city. Our team will be arriving on the 4th of next month. I am looking to boon a rooms with the attached bathroom for more privacy and convenience. I would also like to request a big hall for the training session. I would like to have a buffet for our candidates and staff in the hall with both vegetarian and non vegetarian meals. It is also appreciated if you provide a projector, laptop etc. for the presentation and should be properly furnished with tables and chairs. You can send me the detailed information regarding its total cost of stay, food, rent on equipments during the two- day training. I look forward to hear from you Yours faithfully Gurjeet kaur
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter to
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make
arrangements for the stay during our training session.

My name is
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Gurjeet
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kaur
. I am working as a human resource manager in ABC
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Company
. Our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
deals with the mobile phones. Our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is organizing a training for the candidates of your city.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Our
team will be arriving on the 4th of
next
month. I am looking to boon
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a room" or simply "rooms"?
a rooms
with the attached bathroom for more privacy and convenience. I would
also
like to request a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
hall for the training session.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to have a buffet for our candidates and staff in the hall with both vegetarian and
It appears that a hyphen is missing.
non vegetarian
meals. It is
also
appreciated if you provide a projector, laptop etc. for the presentation and should be
properly
furnished with tables and chairs. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me the detailed information regarding its total cost of stay, food, rent on equipments during the two- day training.

I look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you

Yours
faithfully


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Gurjeet
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kaur
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS letter You are planning a 2 day work training outside your city next month Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding accommodation arrangement for your visit In your letter you should tell 4 introduce yourself and your company 5 ask availability of th v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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