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You had arranged to meet a friend next week but you have realized that you will not be able to go Write a letter to your friend In your letter Cancel the meeting with your friend and opologize explain why you will not be able to meet your friend suggest w v.2

You had arranged to meet a friend next week but you have realized that you will not be able to go Write a letter to your friend In your letter Cancel the meeting with your friend and opologize explain why you will not be able to meet your friend suggest w v. 2

Dear Paul, How are you? Hope you' re doing well and your family is fine. I am writing to inform you that I wont be able to come to play badminton next week as we had planned. I understand that we had planned this meeting as per my schedule and I truly apologize for cancelling at the last moment. My company is sending me for a short training to Delhi on Monday and I will be coming back after 3 weeks. My manager has selected me to attend the training on the basis of my performance. He, also, informed me that this training is very vital for my next promotion. However, I suggest we meet on the falling weekend after I am back from Delhi. I would like to invite you for a dinner party at my residence. This dinner would be special as I will be cooking myself. Please let me know your availability. See you soon, Albert

Dear Paul,

How are you? Hope Possible spelling mistake found.youyouryous
you&
#039; The phrase 're doing' should be written as one word.redoing
re doing
 well and your family is fine.

I am writing to inform you that I Please make sure you mean 'wont' (a habit), not "won't"/"won’t" (short for 'will not')?won'twon’t
wont
 be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to play badminton next
 week as we had planned. I understand that we had planned this meeting as per my schedule and I truly
 apologize for cancelling at the last moment.

My This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is sending me for a short training to Delhi on Monday and I will be coming back after 3 weeks. My manager has selected me to attend the training on the basis of my performance. He, also
, informed me that this training is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 vital for my next
 promotion.

However
, I suggest we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 on the falling weekend after I am back from Delhi. I would like to invite you for a dinner party at my residence. This dinner would be special as I will be cooking myself. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know your availability.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
,

Albert

4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You had arranged to meet a friend next week but you have realized that you will not be able to go Write a letter to your friend In your letter Cancel the meeting with your friend and opologize explain why you will not be able to meet your friend suggest w v. 2

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

158 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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