Dear Sir,
My name is Chandni Sharma hail from Bathinda city Being the daily customer of your transport services I suppose to aware you about the inconvenience which are being faced by us. Here I am paining down to grab your attention towards above said problem.
Although, your bus services are rather cheaper then others and the service have been consumed by from long time but now a days it seem that the untrained drivers are being hire by you who are driving so roughly and threatened the masses. few days a ago we are about to met an accident due to his harsh driving which can be harmful for folks as well as for your good will.
Here I want to suggest you to warn them for rush driving or firstly trained them in a proper way so that people can remain trust on your transport and can assure their safety with you.
Hope you will consider my problem and will act sharply on that.
Your faithfully
Chandni Sharma
Dear Sir,
My name is
Chandni
Sharma hail from
Bathinda
city Being the daily customer of your transport services I suppose to aware you about the inconvenience which are
being faced
by us. Here I am paining down to grab your attention towards above said problem.
Although, your bus services are
rather
cheaper then
others and the service have
been consumed
by from long time
but
now a days
it
seem
that the untrained drivers are being hire by you who are driving
so
roughly and threatened the masses.
few
days
a
ago we are about
to met
an accident due to his harsh driving which can be harmful for folks
as well
as for your
good
will.
Here I want to suggest you to warn them for rush driving or
firstly
trained them
in a proper way
so
that
people
can remain trust on your transport and can assure their safety with you.
Hope you will consider my problem and will act
sharply
on that.
Your
faithfully
Chandni
Sharma
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