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There have been problem with public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company in your letter. 1. Describe the problems. 2. Explain how these problems effective you and others. 3. Suggest what could be don v.2

There have been problem with public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company in your letter. 1. Describe the problems. 2. Explain how these problems effective you and others. 3. Suggest what could be don v. 2
Dear Sir, My name is Chandni Sharma hail from Bathinda city Being the daily customer of your transport services I suppose to aware you about the inconvenience which are being faced by us. Here I am paining down to grab your attention towards above said problem. Although, your bus services are rather cheaper then others and the service have been consumed by from long time but now a days it seem that the untrained drivers are being hire by you who are driving so roughly and threatened the masses. few days a ago we are about to met an accident due to his harsh driving which can be harmful for folks as well as for your good will. Here I want to suggest you to warn them for rush driving or firstly trained them in a proper way so that people can remain trust on your transport and can assure their safety with you. Hope you will consider my problem and will act sharply on that. Your faithfully Chandni Sharma
Dear Sir,

My name is
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Chandni
Sharma hail from
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Bathinda
city Being the daily customer of your transport services I suppose to aware you about the inconvenience which are
being faced
by us. Here I am paining down to grab your attention towards above said problem.

Although, your bus services are
rather
Did you mean "cheaper than"?
cheaper then
others and the service have
been consumed
by from long time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
Did you mean "nowadays"?
now a days
it
Did you mean "seems"?
seem
that the untrained drivers are being hire by you who are driving
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
roughly and threatened the masses.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
few
days
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
ago we are about
Did you mean "to be met" or "to meet"?
to met
an accident due to his harsh driving which can be harmful for folks
as well
as for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
will.

Here I want to suggest you to warn them for rush driving or
firstly
trained them
Consider replacing "in a proper way" with the adverb for "proper"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a proper way
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can remain trust on your transport and can assure their safety with you.

Hope you will consider my problem and will act
sharply
on that.

Your
faithfully


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Chandni
Sharma
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS letter There have been problem with public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company in your letter. 1. Describe the problems. 2. Explain how these problems effective you and others. 3. Suggest what could be don v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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