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Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged a delivery of goods and say Inform him her what items you have purchasd that were supposed to be delivered What issues did you face with the delivery service Suggest what can be done about the mat v.2

Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged a delivery of goods and say Inform him her what items you have purchasd that were supposed to be delivered What issues did you face with the delivery service Suggest what can be done about the mat v. 2
Dear Mr. Smith, My name is Safaa Hussein, and I am one of your frequent clients. I am writing to complain about your delivery service on an item which I bought and I already paid full price via my Visa. Last week, I make an online order through your website, a Chanel sunglasses, shipment number 215484215. The information on the Website mentioned that it will arrive in 48 hours. However, it has been a whole week now and I didn’t receive the product. Moreover, I send a complain message to the Customer Service, and I did not get any respond. I would like to cancel my order and get my money back. I recommend to make some up-dates on your website and punish the person who is responsible for this issue. I look forward to hearing from you. Your prompt response is highly appreciated. Should you require any further information, you can contact me via my e-mail or WhatsApp number; here it is: 2546592671 Sincerely yours, Safaa Hussein
Dear Mr. Smith,

My name is
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Safaa
Hussein, and I am one of your frequent clients. I am writing to complain about your delivery service on an item which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
and I already paid full price via my Visa.

Last week, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an online order through your website, a Chanel sunglasses, shipment number 215484215. The information on the Website mentioned that it will arrive in 48 hours.

However
, it has been a whole week
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
and I didn’t receive the product.
Moreover
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
a
The word 'complain' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "complaint"?
complain
message to the Customer Service, and I did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
any respond.

I would like to cancel my order and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
my money back. I recommend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
up-dates on your website and punish the person who is responsible for this issue.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to hearing from you. Your prompt response is
highly
appreciated. Should you require any
further
information, you can contact me via my e-mail or WhatsApp number; here it is: 2546592671

Sincerely
yours,

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Safaa
Hussein
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged a delivery of goods and say Inform him her what items you have purchasd that were supposed to be delivered What issues did you face with the delivery service Suggest what can be done about the mat v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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