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Writing task 1 a letter Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged a delivery of goods and say Inform him her what items you have purchased that were supposed to be delivered What issues did you face with the delivery service S v.2

Writing task 1 a letter Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged a delivery of goods and say Inform him her what items you have purchased that were supposed to be delivered What issues did you face with the delivery service S v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to bring into your notice about consignment that is not delivered yet. On 20 th April, I had purchased 4 air conditioners of brand Daikin from your establishment. The invoice number is ' ER67YHU' that amounts to 152000 Rs including delivery charges. These were supposed to be delivered on or before 25 April. However, I received a text message today that delivery will be delayed now. When I tracked the conignment from shipping partner I came to know that there is technical fault in vehicle due to which shipment would fail to reach on time. These units are purchased for my new saloon and I had planned to get it live on 5th May. Moreover, invitations are already sent and there is no chance to postpone it. Hence, I am requesting you to align your technical team to provide early installation. Because during purchase it was informed that installation can take 5-6 businees days, once delivered and pre installation is the only way to overcome the logistics delay. Other than this, I can also install it locally if the charges could be reimbursed. I hope you will give due consideration to this letter and may take a prompt action for this inconvenience. Thanking You, Roman Cook.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to bring into your notice about consignment
that is
not delivered
yet
.

On
Did you mean "20th"?
20 th
April, I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
4 air conditioners of brand
Possible spelling mistake found.
Daikin
from your establishment. The invoice number is ' ER67YHU' that amounts to 152000 Rs including delivery charges. These
were supposed
to
be delivered
on or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
25 April.
However
, I received a text message
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
that delivery will
be delayed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tracked
the
Possible spelling mistake found.
conignment
from shipping partner I came to know that there is technical fault in vehicle due to which shipment would fail to reach on time.

These units are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
for my new saloon and I had planned to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
on 5th May.
Moreover
, invitations are already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
and there is no chance to postpone it.
Hence
, I am requesting you to align your technical team to provide early installation.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
during
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
it
was informed
that installation can take 5-6
Possible spelling mistake found.
businees
days, once delivered and
This word is normally spelled as one.
pre installation
is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
way to overcome the logistics delay. Other than this, I can
also
install it
locally
if the charges could
be reimbursed
.

I hope you will give due consideration to this letter and may take a prompt action for this inconvenience.

Thanking You,

Roman Cook.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter Writing task 1 a letter Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged a delivery of goods and say Inform him her what items you have purchased that were supposed to be delivered What issues did you face with the delivery service S v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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