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You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager to apologize for this absence. In your letter: •Tell your manager what event it was•Say how important the event was•State the reasons for your ab v.1

You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager to apologize for this absence. In your letter: •Tell your manager what event it was•Say how important the event was•State the reasons for your ab v. 1
Dear Dr. Vu, I am writing this letter to apologize for my absence from our hospital’s 10th annual medical event. As you’ve known, this event is held annually to summarize treatment successes from all departments throughout the year and to propose new medical innovations. In this event, our Trauma division delivered a research about a newly-tested technique of bone fracture fixation and I was supposed to have a small presentation. I believe this should be a great opportunity to increase the credibility in conducting medical research of our department in the hospital. Unfortunately, I could not attend this annual meeting due to some urgent problems of my family. My grandfather was hospitalized because of a severe fever while other family members were on a trip to visit distant relatives in the US. Thus, I was not able to participate and deliver my presentation. I sincerely apologize for my absence and I trust that you will understand my situation. I hope my apology will be accepted. Kindest regards,
Dear Dr.
Vu
,

I am writing this letter to apologize for my absence from our hospital’s 10th annual medical
event
.

As you’ve known, this
event
is held
annually
to summarize
treatment successes from all departments throughout the year and to propose new medical innovations. In this
event
, our Trauma division delivered
a research
about a
newly
-
tested
technique of bone fracture
fixation and
I
was supposed
to have a
small
presentation.

I believe this should be a great opportunity to increase the credibility in conducting medical research of our department in the hospital.

Unfortunately, I could not attend this annual meeting due to
some
urgent problems of my family. My grandfather
was hospitalized
because
of a severe fever while other family members were on a trip to visit distant relatives in the US.
Thus
, I was not able to participate and deliver my presentation. I
sincerely
apologize for my absence and I trust that you will understand my situation.

I hope my apology will be
accepted
.

Kindest regards,
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager to apologize for this absence. In your letter: •Tell your manager what event it was•Say how important the event was•State the reasons for your ab v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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