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Your friend invited you to his her birthday party but you were unable to attend Write a letter to apologize for your absence In your letter State why you could not go Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner Suggest another time to meet v.2

Your friend invited you to his her birthday party but you were unable to attend Write a letter to apologize for your absence In your letter State why you could not go Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner Suggest another time to meet v. 2
Dear Tuan, How are you, my friend? I believe I owe you an apology for not showing up at your birthday party at your house last Saturday. You know, I couldn’t be there because there was an emergent surgical case at my hospital and my senior asked for a back-up while other colleagues were too far away. Apparently, I was the only one to assist him. The surgery went through 3 hours and I was exhausted, so I couldn’t stop by your house after that. As you can see, this was such a spontaneous incident that I didn’t expect at all. At first, I thought the surgery was going to be over quickly. But, since it went out of hand, I couldn’t give you a call and I’m really sorry about this. I hope that you’ll understand and forgive my absence. Last, please let me make it up to you by buying you a drink this Sunday. I’ll be totally free from work and I’m sure you’ll be too. I’m looking forward to receiving your call soon. Your friend,
Dear
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Tuan
,

How are you, my friend? I believe I owe you an apology for not showing up at your birthday party at your
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house
last Saturday.

You know, I couldn’t be there
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because
there was an emergent surgical case at my hospital and my senior
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asked for
a back-up while other colleagues were too far away.
Apparently
, I was the
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only
one to assist him. The surgery went through 3
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hours and
I
was exhausted
,
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so
I couldn’t
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stop
by your
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house
after that.

As you can
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see
, this was such a spontaneous incident that I didn’t
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expect
at all. At
first
, I
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thought
the surgery was going to be over
quickly
.
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But
, since it went out of hand, I couldn’t give you a call and I’m
really
sorry about this. I hope that you’ll understand and forgive my absence.

Last,
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please
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let
me
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make
it up to you by buying you a drink this Sunday. I’ll be
totally
free from work and I’m sure you’ll be too.

I’m looking forward to receiving your call
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soon
.

Your friend,
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IELTS letter Your friend invited you to his her birthday party but you were unable to attend Write a letter to apologize for your absence In your letter State why you could not go Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner Suggest another time to meet v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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