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You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter, you should: describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule. v.2

You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter, you should: describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule. v. 2
Dear Mr Mehta, I am writing this letter to express my interest in doing an accounting course at EH computer classes. The course taken by EH computer classes on " Technicalities of Tally" teaches the technical aspects of the new tax system in detail. It majorly focuses on fetching vivid accounting reports, calculation of tax and vital tips and techniques to maintain proper accounts. Since there has been an enormous change in the tax structure, our department is facing too much difficulty. Many of the employees are not able to understand the new tax system. Therefore, I am interested in learning from experts and cater the same learning to my subordinates and colleagues at the organization. This will aid our organization to get equipped with the new tax system and make minimal mistakes while filing crucial tax returns. The course time is from 8 to 10 on weekdays and 9 to 12 on weekends. As I will be late by an hour in the morning, I will try to cover up my work by coming on weekends. My subordinates and colleagues have decided to devote an extra hour after office to learn the same concepts from me. I solicit your co-operation. Hoping for your positive reply. Yours sincerely John Patel
Dear Mr
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Mehta
,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in doing an accounting course at EH computer classes.

The course taken by EH computer classes on
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; Technicalities of
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Tally&quot
; teaches the technical aspects of the new
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tax
system in detail. It
majorly
focuses on fetching vivid accounting reports, calculation of
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tax
and vital tips and techniques to maintain proper accounts.

Since there has been an enormous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tax
structure, our department is facing too much difficulty.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
of the employees are not able to understand the new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tax
system.
Therefore
, I
am interested
in learning from experts and cater the same learning to my subordinates and colleagues at the organization. This will aid our organization to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
equipped with the new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tax
system and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
minimal mistakes while filing crucial
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tax
returns.

The course time is from 8 to 10 on weekdays and 9 to 12 on weekends. As I will be late by an hour in the morning, I will try to cover up my work by coming on weekends. My subordinates and colleagues have decided to devote an extra hour after office to learn the same concepts from me.

I solicit your co-operation.

Hoping for your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reply.

Yours
sincerely


John Patel
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter, you should: describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule. v. 2

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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