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Essay topics: A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for where you are away• give instructions about how to care for your pet• describe other v.2

Essay topics: A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for where you are away• give instructions about how to care for your pet• describe other v. 2
Dear Jacob, I hope this letter finds you in good health. I want to thank you for taking the responsibility of looking after my house during my vacations in Bali. I am sure that you will easily handle all the household tasks without any inconvenience. I am writing to inform you about some of the chores that you need to take care of while i am away. i want to tell you that if you need to contact me for any reason then please don' t hesitate to ring me on my mobile. Ive written my phone number on a notepad which is placed on the dining table. currently i am staying at The Lavina Bali Resort but if i changed my hotel, i will definitely inform you about the situation. Otherwise, you can also text me on whatsapp or make a call on skype. i also want to mention to feed my dog twice in a day in his feeding bowl which you will effortlessly find in the upper drawer next to the refrigerator. Also, don' t forget to check the throughout the day that he has fresh water in his bowl. I would like you to take care of my plants too by watering them. while, the indoor ones in the lounge only need water once in a week, the plants on the balcony require to irrigate daily unless there has been heavy rainfall. Finally, please don' t forget to clear my mailbox every day for security purpose and turn on the outside lights when its dark. I hope that you will not find any difficulties in pursuing these tasks comfortably. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours lovingly Chris Brown
Dear Jacob,

I hope this letter finds you in
good
health. I want to thank you for taking the responsibility of looking after my
house
during my vacations in Bali.
I
am sure that you will
easily
handle all the household tasks without any inconvenience.
I
am writing to inform you about
some of the
chores that you need to take care of while
i
am away.

i
want to
tell
you that if you need to contact me for any reason then
please
don&
#039; t hesitate to ring me on my mobile.
Ive
written my phone number on a notepad which
is placed
on the dining table.
currently
i
am staying at The
Lavina
Bali Resort
but
if
i
changed
my hotel,
i
will definitely inform you about the situation.
Otherwise
, you can
also
text me on
whatsapp
or
make
a call on skype.

i
also
want to mention to feed my dog twice in a day in his feeding bowl which you will
effortlessly
find in the upper drawer
next
to the refrigerator.
Also
,
don&
#039; t forget to
check
the throughout the day that he has fresh water in his bowl.

I would like you to take care of my plants too by watering them.
while
, the indoor ones in the lounge
only
need water once in a week, the plants on the balcony require
to irrigate
daily unless there has been heavy rainfall.
Finally
,
please
don&
#039; t forget to
clear
my mailbox every day for security purpose and turn on the outside lights when
its
dark.

I hope that you will not find any difficulties in pursuing these tasks
comfortably
. I am looking forward to seeing you
soon
.

Yours
lovingly


Chris Brown
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Mistakes
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IELTS letter Essay topics: A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for where you are away• give instructions about how to care for your pet• describe other v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
284 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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