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You want to recommend someone to work in a company. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, you should tell: •Who the person is•How did you know the person•Working experience of the person. •Why do you recommend the person? v.2

You want to recommend someone to work in a company. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, you should tell: •Who the person is•How did you know the person•Working experience of the person. •Why do you recommend the person? v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam, I intend to write this letter to recommend a skillful professional for the available vacant position of service design expert in our organization. His name is Sam, 33 years old corporate professional with 9 years of diversified experience in the field of customer insights, design thinking and pioneer of service design concept inculcator in his previous organization. I and Sam are the same school graduates and we had shared the same room in the hostel as well. So I am well aware of his personal and professional expertise. Sam has a tremendous track record of incorporating Service Design methodologies in some big multinational companies like Telenor and Citi Bank. He has been an influential asset that changed people’s perspective of handling corporate issues. His role has been instrumental in inculcating customer feedback in any new product development. Academically he is a certified scrum master and holds a Master degree in Design thinking from the Stanford University of London. I feel honored referring him to the aforementioned position as I am quite certain that he is going to add a lot of value using his skillsets and for building foundations of the service design concept in our organization. I have attached his resume for your reference as well. Yours Sincerely, John
Dear Sir/Madam,

I intend to write this letter to recommend a skillful professional for the available vacant position of
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service
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design
expert in our organization. His name is Sam, 33 years
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old
corporate professional with 9 years of diversified experience in the field of customer insights,
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design
thinking and pioneer of
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service
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design
concept
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inculcator
in his previous organization. I and Sam are the same school
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graduates and
we had shared the same room in the hostel
as well
.
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So
I am well aware of his personal and professional expertise.

Sam has a tremendous
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track
record of incorporating
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Service
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Design
methodologies in
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some
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big
multinational
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companies
like
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Telenor
and
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Citi
Bank. He has been an influential asset that
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changed
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people
’s perspective of handling corporate issues. His role has been instrumental in inculcating customer feedback in any new product development.
Academically
he is a certified scrum master and holds a Master degree in
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Design
thinking from the Stanford University of London. I feel honored referring him to the aforementioned position as I am quite certain that he is going to
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add
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a lot of
value using his
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skillsets
and for building foundations of the
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service
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design
concept in our organization. I have attached his resume for your reference
as well
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

John
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10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS letter You want to recommend someone to work in a company. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, you should tell: •Who the person is•How did you know the person•Working experience of the person. •Why do you recommend the person? v. 2

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
211 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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