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You are travelling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter include: Where you are goingWhat the favor is? Why you need this friend to help? v.2

You are travelling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter include: Where you are goingWhat the favor is? Why you need this friend to help? v. 2
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirits. Sorry, it’s taken me so long to write back. Anyways, I’m writing if you could do me a favor. Actually, my wife and I are going to Shimla for four days to celebrate our 10th wedding anniversary on 28th January. I booked air tickets and planned a surprise dinner at The Taj Hotel. After that, we will go for a long drive for sightseeing. How does this sound? By the way, to our surprise, we came to know that our son Vibhu can’t come with us because he has a mid-term exam during this trip. So, I thought, I’d ask you if you could take care of my son. I can assure you he is a decent friendly boy friendly and he will not bother you much. Like you, he also loves to play cricket, so, I’m sure you both would enjoy playing cricket in the garden. I’d really appreciate your help in this situation. I can’t wait to hear from you. Your friend, Deepak Sharma
Dear John,

I hope this letter finds you in
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good
health and spirits. Sorry, it’s taken me
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so
long to write back. Anyways, I’m writing if you could do me a favor.

Actually, my wife and I are going to
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Shimla
for four days to celebrate our 10th wedding anniversary on 28th January. I booked air tickets and planned a surprise dinner at The
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Taj
Hotel. After that, we will go for a long drive for sightseeing. How does this sound?

By the way, to our surprise, we came to know that our son
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Vibhu
can’t
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come
with us
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because
he has a mid-term exam during this trip.
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So
, I
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thought
, I’d ask you if you could take care of my son. I can assure you he is a decent friendly boy
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
friendly and
he will not bother you much. Like you, he
also
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loves
to play cricket,
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so
, I’m sure you both would enjoy playing cricket in the garden.

I’d
really
appreciate your
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help
in this situation. I can’t wait to hear from you.

Your friend,

Deepak Sharma
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
He who knows no foreign languages know nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS letter You are travelling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter include: Where you are goingWhat the favor is? Why you need this friend to help? v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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