You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to the supervisior of department, describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job. v.2
You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to the supervisior of department, describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about my kitchen robot that I purchased in your center store last Saturday and with your poor customer service I received when I called your company to discuss the problem.
The main problem with the robot is that its knives do not spin and work properly, when I turn the device on the blades start to turning itself round and then they suddenly stop spinning. .
Luckily, I noticed that fault after short time, I called the your shop requesting fast action to be taken, however, the person who answered the phone replied that there was nothing he could do to resolve this problem.
I would appreciate it if you could replace my robot for a new one of the same brand and features. I will kept the receipt my purchase for your replacement.
Please contact me and inforn me know how you insist to resolve this problem.
Your Faithfully.
Steven
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about my kitchen robot that I
purchased
in your center store last Saturday and with your poor customer service I received when I called your
company
to discuss the problem.
The main problem with the robot is that its knives do not spin and work
properly
, when I turn the device on the blades
start
to turning itself
round and
then they
suddenly
stop
spinning.
.
Luckily, I noticed that fault after short time, I called
the your shop
requesting
fast
action to
be taken
,
however
, the person who answered the phone replied that there was nothing he could do to resolve this problem.
I would appreciate it if you could replace my robot for a new one of the same brand and features. I will
kept
the receipt my
purchase
for your replacement.
Please
contact me and
inforn
me know how you
insist to resolve
this problem.
Your
Faithfully
.
Steven
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