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You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is avilable in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of the bookstore. In your letter- Give details of the book- Say why you need this book- Tell how you will pay for it. v.1

You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is avilable in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of the bookstore. In your letter- Give details of the book- Say why you need this book- Tell how you will pay for it. v. 1
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to purchase the motivational book, The Art of War, written by Sheen Jib which is available at your store. I am staying at Vapi, a small town situated near Surat. I have inquired about the book " Art of War" in my town from several storekeepers, but it is not available. While going through your website, I got to know that this book is available at your store. It has a white cover page with the title of the book written in red. Moreover, the book is published in the year 2001. I am a college student at SPB where it is a culture for every student to speak about one motivational book every semester. Since the book Art of War explains deeply on how to overcome fears and defeat, I am interested to give a presentation on it. As I am a student at university and have limited access to banks, I can deposit the cash in your account. You can mail me the details of your bank account on my email id abc@gmail. com or on 9876543218. I solicit your co-operation. Yours faithfully John Patel.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to
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purchase
the motivational
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book
, The Art of War, written by Sheen Jib which is available at your store.

I am staying at
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Vapi
, a
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small
town situated near Surat.
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I
have inquired about the
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book
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&quot
; Art of
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War&quot
; in my town from several storekeepers,
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but
it is not available. While going through your website, I
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got
to know that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
is available at your store. It has a white cover page with the title of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
written in red.
Moreover
, the
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book
is published
in the year 2001.

I am a college student at SPB where it is a culture for every student to speak about one motivational
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
every semester. Since the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
Art of War
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explains
deeply
on how to overcome fears and defeat, I
am interested
to give a presentation on it.

As I am a student at university and have limited access to banks, I can deposit the cash in your account. You can mail me the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of your bank account on my email id
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abc@gmail
.
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com
or on 9876543218.

I solicit your co-operation.

Yours
faithfully


John Patel.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is avilable in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of the bookstore. In your letter- Give details of the book- Say why you need this book- Tell how you will pay for it. v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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