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Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letterCorrect the information in the articleExplain why it is important for the magazine to give correct informationSuggest what the magazine should do about the situation. v.2

Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letterCorrect the information in the articleExplain why it is important for the magazine to give correct informationSuggest what the magazine should do about the situation. v. 2
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to tell and correct you about the wrong information that was mentioned in your magazine about the Surat' s diamond in June month' s edition. I am a resident of Surat and have a subscription of your magazine since last 2 years. Following regularly this magazine has given me wide knowledge about a variety of topics. There was an article about Surat' s diamond which mentioned that some of the diamonds sold in the world are polished and cut in Surat. Well, I would like to correct this false statement, not some but majority of the diamonds sold in the world are polished and cut in my town. Since your magazine has many international subscribers, the wrong information about the diamond polishing and cutting may create a different image of my town. Surat is known for this business across the globe and it is important for people to know this unique quality that my town own in the diamond business. I would urge you to correct the information about the fact for the number of diamonds polished and cut in my town. In August month' s edition, you ought to give the correct information in your magazine, which will change the wrong notion of people that they read about my town. On any other doubts or questions, you can mail me on Abc @gmail. com Looking forward to the correct article in August' s month edition. Your' s faithfully, John Patel.
Dear Sir/ Madam,

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magazine
since last 2 years. Following
regularly
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magazine
has
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Surat&
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diamond
which mentioned that
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sold in the world
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in Surat. Well, I would like to
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majority of the
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sold in the world
are polished
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in my town.

Since your
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international subscribers, the
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polishing and cutting may create a
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image of my town. Surat
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to know this unique quality that my town
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business.

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about the fact for the number of
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polished and
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in my town. In August
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month&
#039; s edition, you ought to give the
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, which will
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On any other doubts or questions, you can mail me on
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Abc
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@gmail
.
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Looking forward to the
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article in
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August&
#039; s month edition.

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faithfully
,

John Patel.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letterCorrect the information in the articleExplain why it is important for the magazine to give correct informationSuggest what the magazine should do about the situation. v. 2

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
247 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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