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You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter• explain your positi v.2

You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter• explain your positi v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to an interview for a place studying in Alf College. My name is Rahi Honarvar and I have applied for a course in Computer science and technology and consequently I have been invited for an interview in Alf College on 27th of June, 6pm. I am afraid I have to inform you that it would not be feasible for me to attend this interview at this specific time since I have made an appointment with my dentist earlier and I cannot cancel it. I apologize for any inconvenience that I may have caused. I would be grateful if it is appropriate for you to give me the chance in order attending the interview on 28th of June, 6 pm or even the mentioned day but later at 7 pm. I would also like to know about the length of the interview as well as any test that may be included. Once again I apologize for the inconvenience and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Rahi Honarvar
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
for a place studying in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Alf
College.

My name is
Possible spelling mistake found.
Rahi
Possible spelling mistake found.
Honarvar
and I have applied for a course in Computer science and technology and
consequently
I have
been invited
for an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Alf
College on 27th of June, 6pm.

I am afraid I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
inform you that it would not be feasible for me to attend this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
at this specific time since I have made an appointment with my dentist earlier and I cannot cancel it. I apologize for any inconvenience that I may have caused.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would be grateful if it is appropriate for you to give me the chance in order attending the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
on 28th of June, 6 pm or even the mentioned day
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
later at 7 pm.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would
also
like to know about the length of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
as well
as any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
that may
be included
.

Once again I apologize for the inconvenience and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Rahi
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Honarvar
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter• explain your positi v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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