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You visited a restaurant for a meal. You were served meat (non-veg) instead of vegetarian meal. You are very annoyed at this incident. Complain to the restaurant manager for the same. In your letter•explain your annoying experience•describe the unprofe v.2

You visited a restaurant for a meal. You were served meat (non-veg) instead of vegetarian meal. You are very annoyed at this incident. Complain to the restaurant manager for the same. In your letter•explain your annoying experience•describe the unprofe v. 2
To whom it may concern. I am writing to notify you of a claim about poor quality meal against your restaurant. Besides, I am disappointed concerning your attendant’s rude when dealing with the client’s request. It is hurting your business. I have ordered a dish of vegetarian in your restaurant early last week. But, once the waiter was served me, I understand that is not my order. He has brought me red meat rather than dish of vegetarian. I thought that your restaurant at least manage to check my order and apologize me. However, I was shocked when I saw the restaurants’ staff members insisted that they made no mistake and were not held responsible. This situation is compounded by the fact that they suggested me to refer this problem to the restaurant manager. This situation is seriously causing me considerable anxiety. Unless you take prompt action to rectify this problem in any way you can, I will be forced to take legal action regarding your restaurant’s refusal to honor the law and apologize me. I hope we can work something out to our mutual benefit. Your earliest response will be appreciated. Faithfully yours, Mans Sh
To whom it may concern.

I am writing to notify you of a claim about poor quality meal against your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
.
Besides
, I
am disappointed
concerning your attendant’s rude when dealing with the client’s request. It is hurting your business.

I have ordered a dish of vegetarian in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
early last week.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, once the waiter
was served
me, I understand
that is
not my order. He has brought me red meat
rather
than dish of vegetarian. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
at least manage to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
my order and apologize me.
However
, I
was shocked
when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurants’
staff members insisted that they made no mistake and were not held responsible. This situation
is compounded
by the fact that they suggested me to refer this problem to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
manager. This situation is
seriously
causing me considerable anxiety. Unless you take prompt action to rectify this problem in any way you can, I will
be forced
to take legal action regarding your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant’s
refusal to honor the law and apologize me. I hope we can work something out to our mutual benefit.

Your earliest response will
be appreciated
.

Faithfully
yours,

'Mans' refers to the verb 'man' meaning take command of something. Did you mean "men" or "man's"?
Mans
Sh
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter You visited a restaurant for a meal. You were served meat (non-veg) instead of vegetarian meal. You are very annoyed at this incident. Complain to the restaurant manager for the same. In your letter•explain your annoying experience•describe the unprofe v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
195 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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