To whom it may concern.
I am writing to notify you of a claim about poor quality meal against your restaurant. Besides, I am disappointed concerning your attendant’s rude when dealing with the client’s request. It is hurting your business.
I have ordered a dish of vegetarian in your restaurant early last week. But, once the waiter was served me, I understand that is not my order. He has brought me red meat rather than dish of vegetarian. I thought that your restaurant at least manage to check my order and apologize me. However, I was shocked when I saw the restaurants’ staff members insisted that they made no mistake and were not held responsible. This situation is compounded by the fact that they suggested me to refer this problem to the restaurant manager. This situation is seriously causing me considerable anxiety. Unless you take prompt action to rectify this problem in any way you can, I will be forced to take legal action regarding your restaurant’s refusal to honor the law and apologize me. I hope we can work something out to our mutual benefit.
Your earliest response will be appreciated.
Faithfully yours,
Mans Sh
To whom it may concern.
I am writing to notify you of a claim about poor quality meal against your
restaurant
.
Besides
, I
am disappointed
concerning your attendant’s rude when dealing with the client’s request. It is hurting your business.
I have ordered a dish of vegetarian in your
restaurant
early last week.
But
, once the waiter
was served
me, I understand
that is
not my order. He has brought me red meat
rather
than dish of vegetarian. I
thought
that your
restaurant
at least manage to
check
my order and apologize me.
However
, I
was shocked
when I
saw
the
restaurants’
staff members insisted that they made no mistake and were not held responsible. This situation
is compounded
by the fact that they suggested me to refer this problem to the
restaurant
manager. This situation is
seriously
causing me considerable anxiety. Unless you take prompt action to rectify this problem in any way you can, I will
be forced
to take legal action regarding your
restaurant’s
refusal to honor the law and apologize me. I hope we can work something out to our mutual benefit.
Your earliest response will
be appreciated
.
Faithfully
yours,
Mans
Sh
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