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You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wron v.2

You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wron v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Samvedna Puri, dweller of Haward Street, North London. I am iscribing this epistle on the behalf of whole group to express disatisfaction in respect of unacceptable services at your restaurant. Being a marketing team at ' Sudan' corporation, we have to meet our foreign delegates on daily basis for this purpose our company has selected your place two months ago. Undoubtedly, this place has a goodwill among the localites but meager food serving facilities are ultimatly deliorating its reputation. Even though in every visit we had splendid services, case was not same with bygone day as your new employed dealing staff lack at adequate communication skills with custmers and unpolite behaviour worse the scenario. Moreover, served food was not as per the given order as we ordered for vegeterian cuisines and got non-veg food items which was so disrespectful. It world be high appreciable if you could personally attend our orders and follow the cooking instructions because such business meetings are very imperative for company. Otherwise, neglegence at your part would force me to look for other place. Anticipate a prompt actions from your end. Your Sincerely, Samvedna Puri.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
Samvedna
Puri
, dweller of
Haward
Street, North London. I am
iscribing
this epistle on the behalf of whole group to express
disatisfaction
in respect of unacceptable services at your restaurant. Being a marketing team at '
Sudan&
#039; corporation, we
have to
meet
our foreign delegates on daily basis for this purpose our
company
has selected your place two months ago.

Undoubtedly
, this place has a goodwill among the
localites
but
meager food serving facilities are
ultimatly
deliorating
its reputation.
Even though
in every visit we had splendid services, case was not same with bygone day as your new employed dealing staff lack at adequate communication
skills
with
custmers
and
unpolite
behaviour
worse the scenario.
Moreover
, served food was not as per the
given
order as we ordered for
vegeterian
cuisines and
got
non-veg food items which was
so
disrespectful.

It world
be high appreciable if you could
personally
attend our orders and follow the cooking instructions
because
such business meetings are
very
imperative for
company
.
Otherwise
,
neglegence
at your part would force me to look for other place.

Anticipate a prompt actions from your
end
.

Your
Sincerely
,

Samvedna
Puri
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Mistakes

IELTS letter You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wron v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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