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A close friend is coming to visit you he she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area Write a letter to your friend In your letter ask more details about your friend s plans Suggest some places to visit and thing v.2

A close friend is coming to visit you he she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area Write a letter to your friend In your letter ask more details about your friend s plans Suggest some places to visit and thing v. 2
Dear Shima I hope you and your families are very well. I have very excited when I have heard you are visiting my hometown. Therefore, I have decided to write to inform you about some information that may be necessary for your journey. Please, let me know about your arrival details and length of stay so that I can schedule accordingly. Generally speaking, it is very great time for visiting Büyükada due to weather is pleasant and is the best season for cycling. The car exhibition, also, will held on the weekend about 3 days and all of car brands coming in this event from all over the world. Actually, you can benefit from easy access to the newest version of automobiles in this fair. However, I have planned for swimming in the special pool in the city. This pool is four seasons with a big Jacuzzi that is unique in Asia. After that, I tend to familiar you with a suspended restaurant in my hometown that we can have dinner in this location. I believe that this can be a particular experience for you. I promise you this travel will be memorable for you. Please, write me back soon, looking forward to welcome you. Best Regards, Mans
Dear
Shima


I hope you and your families are
very
well. I have
very
excited when I have heard you are visiting my hometown.
Therefore
, I have decided to write to inform you about
some
information that may be necessary for your journey.

Please
,
let
me know about your arrival
details
and length of stay
so
that I can schedule
accordingly
.

Generally
speaking, it is
very
great time for visiting
Büyükada
due to weather is pleasant and is the best season for cycling. The car exhibition,
also
, will
held
on the weekend about 3 days and
all of car
brands coming in this
event
from all over the world. Actually, you can benefit from easy access to the newest version of automobiles in this
fair
.

However
, I have planned for swimming in the special pool in the city. This pool is four seasons with a
big
Jacuzzi
that is
unique in Asia. After that, I tend to familiar you with a suspended restaurant in my hometown that we can have dinner in this location. I believe that this can be a particular experience for you. I promise you this travel will be memorable for you.

Please
, write me back
soon
, looking forward
to welcome
you.

Best Regards,

Mans
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter A close friend is coming to visit you he she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area Write a letter to your friend In your letter ask more details about your friend s plans Suggest some places to visit and thing v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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