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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: » explain why you were at the restaurant» describe the problems» write v.9

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: » explain why you were at the restaurant» describe the problems» write v. 9
Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing this letter to bring a few inconveniences, which we faced when we dined at your restaurant yesterday, to your notice. We chose the Indira Nagar branch of your chain of hotels to celebrate the first brithday of my daughter. However, it turned out to be a nightmare, because of many faults of the staff of the hotel. Foremost, we ordered afternoon lunch for about twenty people, but we were provided food for only fifteen members. Moreover, the quality and taste of the rice used was not up to the expectation. Adding to this, sweets, which were promised, were not severed. Furthermore, the staff were rude, when we questioned those improper arrangements. On the whole, this bad experience has left us dumbstruck and greatly disappointed. Hence, we request you to take appropriate action against the people in charge of the branch. It would be even better, if you could provide us a compensation either as a discount on the bill or as vouchers. I am looking forward to your prompt response. Yours sincerely, Janani.
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing this letter to bring a few inconveniences, which we faced when we dined at your restaurant yesterday, to your notice. We chose the Indira Nagar branch of your chain of hotels to celebrate the
first
brithday
of my daughter.
However
, it turned out to be a nightmare,
because
of
many
faults of the staff of the hotel.

Foremost, we ordered afternoon lunch for about twenty
people
,
but
we
were provided
food for
only
fifteen members.
Moreover
, the quality and taste of the rice
used
was not up to the expectation. Adding to this, sweets, which
were promised
, were not severed.
Furthermore
, the staff were rude, when we questioned those improper arrangements.

On the whole
, this
bad
experience has
left
us dumbstruck and
greatly
disappointed.
Hence
, we request you to take appropriate action against the
people
in charge of the branch. It would be even better, if you could provide us a compensation either as a discount on the bill or as vouchers.

I am looking forward to your prompt response.

Yours
sincerely
,

Janani
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: » explain why you were at the restaurant» describe the problems» write v. 9

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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