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12. You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: •give details of your visit to the restaurant•mention the reas v.2

12. You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: •give details of your visit to the restaurant•mention the reas v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my delight on the excellent service and high-quality food offered by your restaurant “Hotel Radisson” Last Sunday we organised a party on the occasion of 50th marriage anniversary of my parents. It was small get together of family and friends. The services provided by restaurant was excellent. The place was decorated beautifully, the waiters were extremely professional and polite. The current food and beverages menu offered a variety of dishes as well as cocktails and mocktails. The quality and the quantity of the food was very satisfying. Moreover, the way the food was presented was extraordinary. The waiters also were very experiences in suggest us the food we should order. We ordered black pepper chicken and hot chilli garlic noodles. The quantity of food was apt and every one was satisfied. Furthermore, there was a perfect blend of black pepper in the meal. The chicken pieces were also perfectly cooked. The noodles were also very delicious. Everyone enjoyed the meal and I would like to thank you for efforts made in organising the party. Yours Sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my delight on the excellent service and high-quality
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food
offered by your restaurant “Hotel
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Radisson
”

Last Sunday we
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organised
a party on the occasion of 50th
Wedding anniversaries are the proper term to describe the anniversary of the day of a wedding.
marriage
anniversary of my parents. It was
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small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
together of family and friends. The services provided by restaurant was excellent. The place
was decorated
beautifully
, the waiters were
extremely
professional and polite.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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current
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food
and beverages menu offered a variety of dishes
as well
as cocktails and mocktails.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
quality and the quantity of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
was
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very
satisfying.
Moreover
, the way the
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food
was presented
was extraordinary. The waiters
also
were
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very
experiences in suggest us the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
we should order.

We ordered black pepper chicken and hot
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chilli
garlic noodles. The quantity of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
was apt and every one
was satisfied
.
Furthermore
, there was a perfect blend of black pepper in the meal. The chicken pieces were
also
perfectly
cooked. The noodles were
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
delicious.

Everyone enjoyed the meal and I would like to thank you for efforts made in
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organising
the party.

Yours
Sincerely


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Prabhpreet
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Kaur
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS letter 12. You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: •give details of your visit to the restaurant•mention the reas v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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