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You have recently visited a museum Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited Write a letter to him her In your letter write where you went what you saw there how you felt about it v.2

You have recently visited a museum Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited Write a letter to him her In your letter write where you went what you saw there how you felt about it v. 2
Dear Shima I hope you and your family are well. I am writing to share my pleasant experience that I recently gain about my visiting of the stunning location. Last week I decided to start studying concerning the history of my country, therefore I have visited an amazing Art museum, located in Tehran, Iran. This site was a perfect place for raising my awareness about the background of my nation. The museum full of a wide variety of historical artefacts from prehistoric times that demonstrate Iranian origins. I had a chance to obvious artefacts and other objects of historical and cultural importance that is conserving in this museum. In fact, this visiting provide a unique learning experience for me to take full advantage of this opportunity. As you know veritably learning history and observing these places such as museums and palaces is important for finding a sense of identity. Visiting this museum was a cultural experience for me. I cannot forget this memorable and attraction site. I advise you to visit this museum as soon as possible. Warm wishes, Mans
Dear
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Shima


I hope you and your family are well. I am writing to share my pleasant experience that I recently gain about my visiting of the stunning location.

Last week I decided to
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start
studying concerning the history of my country,
therefore
I have visited an amazing Art
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museum
, located in Tehran, Iran. This site was a perfect place for raising my awareness about the background of my nation.

The
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museum
full of a wide variety of historical
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artefacts
from prehistoric times that demonstrate Iranian origins. I had a chance to obvious
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artefacts
and other objects of historical and cultural importance
that is
conserving in this museum.

In fact,
The verb 'provide' is plural. Did you mean: "this visiting provides"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
this visiting provide
a unique learning experience for me to take full advantage of this opportunity. As you know
veritably
learning history and observing these places such as
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museums
and palaces is
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important
for finding a sense of identity. Visiting this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
was a cultural experience for me. I cannot forget this memorable and attraction site.

I advise you to visit this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
as
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soon
as possible.

Warm wishes,

'Mans' refers to the verb 'man' meaning take command of something. Did you mean "men" or "man's"?
Mans
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter You have recently visited a museum Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited Write a letter to him her In your letter write where you went what you saw there how you felt about it v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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