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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter. give details of your visit to the restaurant. explain the reason v.5

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter. give details of your visit to the restaurant. explain the reason v. 5
Dear Sir or Madam, Hello. This is Darby who visited one of your restaurants, “The Kaku” which is located on the George Street. I am writing this letter to appreciate you about wonderful meals that my friends and I had in dinner and your great service on the last Saturday night. I often go to your place with my family or friends. I love your food and a reasonable price such as Sushi, Donburi and Ramen. However, at this time, I went there with some of my best friends to celebrate my birthday. Firstly, I would like to say that thank you so much because you provided us great view seats although we did not book and it was very crowded at that time. My friends and I really appreciate you regarding it. Secondly, I could not believe that you made us special food which is not on your menu for my birthday and I cannot forget the taste. Once again, thank you very much for your cuisine and service. I will never forget my last birthday. Yours faithfully, Darby.
Dear Sir or Madam,

Hello. This is Darby who visited one of your restaurants, “The
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Kaku
” which
is located
on the George Street. I am writing this letter to appreciate you about wonderful meals that my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
and I had in dinner and your great service on the last Saturday night.

I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
go to your place with my family or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
your food and a reasonable price such as Sushi,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Donburi
and Ramen.
However
, at this time, I went there with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of my best
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
to celebrate my birthday.

Firstly
, I would like to say that thank you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
you provided us great view seats although we did not book and it was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
crowded at that time. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
and I
really
appreciate you regarding it.
Secondly
, I could not believe that you made us special food which is not on your menu for my birthday and I cannot forget the taste.

Once again, thank you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much for your cuisine and service. I will never forget my last birthday.

Yours
faithfully
,

Darby.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter. give details of your visit to the restaurant. explain the reason v. 5

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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