You recently rented a car, but were not satisfied with it. WRITE a complaint letter to the rental agency. In your letterINTRODUCE yourself. EXPLAIN what went wrong with the car you rented. ASK for some form of compensation. v.2
You recently rented a car, but were not satisfied with it. WRITE a complaint letter to the rental agency. In your letterINTRODUCE yourself. EXPLAIN what went wrong with the car you rented. ASK for some form of compensation. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to lodge a complaint regarding the rented car that I obtained from your office 3 days ago.
On 23 December, I rented a Toyota Corolla car, and I was told that it was in a perfect condition. Your representative assured me that the air conditioning had just been repaired, which I needed the most since I was travelling in a long trip with my family members.
At first, it worked perfectly; however, after about 75 km it started to shut off. Actually, the weather was extremely hot which caused a great inconvenience to all of us, my children in particular. As a result, my younger son has suffered from an asthma attack and has been receiving a condensed course of medication till the moment.
Since the fault was from your side, and as per your rental policy, I am entitled to ask for a full refund; moreover, I would request a compensation discount during my next trip with your agency.
A swift response would be greatly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Randa Agha.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to lodge a complaint regarding the rented car that I obtained from your office 3 days ago.
On 23 December, I rented a Toyota Corolla car, and I was
told
that it was in a perfect condition. Your representative assured me that the air conditioning had
just
been repaired
, which I needed the most since I was travelling in a long trip with my family members.
At
first
, it worked
perfectly
;
however
, after about 75 km it
started
to shut off. Actually, the weather was
extremely
hot which caused a great inconvenience to all of us, my children
in particular
.
As a result
, my younger son has suffered from an asthma attack and has been receiving a condensed course of medication till the moment.
Since the fault was from your side, and as per your rental policy, I
am entitled
to
ask for
a full refund;
moreover
, I would request a compensation discount during my
next
trip with your agency.
A swift response would be
greatly
appreciated.
Yours
faithfully
,
Randa
Agha
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes