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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. v.7

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. v. 7
Dear Sir or Madam, My wife and I visited your restaurant to celebrate our third wedding anniversary on March 20th, 2019. Unfortunately, we had a very negative experience due to a below-average meal and poor staff behaviour. I want you to investigate the reason for such a terrible meal. Otherwise, you are going to lose customers. We arrived at your restaurant at around 6: 00 pm and ordered Doro Wat for our main course. But it tasted astringent due to overcooking. Even after we told this to the waiter on duty, he did not pay attention and told us to complain to the manager instead. Besides, the fruit punch that my wife ordered had no orange juice in it, though the menu stated so. This was very annoying which actually ruined our dining experience. I demand a full refund that I paid for a worthless meal. I also want you to take actions against the waiter who denied to pay attention to our complaints. I look forward to seeing you take immediate action regarding this matter. Yours faithfully, K. Henok
Dear Sir or Madam,

My wife and I visited your restaurant to celebrate our third wedding anniversary on March 20th, 2019. Unfortunately, we had a
very
negative
experience due to a below-average meal and poor staff
behaviour
. I want you to investigate the reason for such a terrible meal.
Otherwise
, you are going to lose customers.

We arrived at your restaurant at around 6: 00 pm and ordered
Doro
Wat
for our main course.
But
it tasted astringent due to overcooking. Even after we
told
this to the waiter on duty, he did not pay attention and
told
us to complain to the manager
instead
.
Besides
, the fruit punch that my wife ordered had no orange juice in it, though the menu stated
so
. This was
very
annoying which actually ruined our dining experience.

I demand a full refund that I paid for a worthless meal. I
also
want you to take actions against the waiter who denied to pay attention to our complaints.

I
look forward to seeing you take immediate action regarding this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,

K.
Henok
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. v. 7

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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