Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of your frequent clients. I am writing to you to inform you that I forget items during my stay in your hotel.
Firstly, I would like to express my satisfaction with my staying in your hotel. I was a guest at your hotel at floor Number 11, Apartment no 222; My booking was from 22 July till 30 July. Unfortunately, after I reached my home, I founded that I forget a piece of cloths which is really important to me; it is a gift from my lovely wife.
let me add this, it is a black leather jacket which can wear only on a formal occasion. Moreover, It has two brown lines on its back.
I would like to recommend that if you can send it to me, I will appreciate this; I suggest that you can send it by DHL, and I will pay any cost.
I look forward to hearing from you; your prompt response is highly appreciated. Should you require any further information, you can contact me; here is the contact number: 555667788. Thanks in advance.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I
am Ahmed
Karem
, and I am one of your frequent clients. I am writing to you to inform you that I forget items during my stay in your hotel.
Firstly
, I would like to express my satisfaction with my staying in your hotel. I was a guest at your hotel at floor Number 11, Apartment no 222; My booking was from 22 July till 30 July. Unfortunately, after I reached my home, I founded that I forget a piece of cloths which is
really
important
to me; it is a gift from my lovely wife.
let
me
add
this, it is a black leather jacket which can wear
only
on a formal occasion.
Moreover
, It has two brown lines on its back.
I would like to recommend that if you can
send
it to me, I will appreciate this; I suggest that you can
send
it by DHL, and I will pay any cost.
I look forward to hearing from you; your prompt response is
highly
appreciated. Should you require any
further
information, you can contact me; here is the contact number: 555667788. Thanks in advance.
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