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You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there Write a letter to the hotel manager and say When and where did you stay Describe your clothes What would you like the manager to do about it v.2

You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there Write a letter to the hotel manager and say When and where did you stay Describe your clothes What would you like the manager to do about it v. 2
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of your frequent clients. I am writing to you to inform you that I forget items during my stay in your hotel. Firstly, I would like to express my satisfaction with my staying in your hotel. I was a guest at your hotel at floor Number 11, Apartment no 222; My booking was from 22 July till 30 July. Unfortunately, after I reached my home, I founded that I forget a piece of cloths which is really important to me; it is a gift from my lovely wife. let me add this, it is a black leather jacket which can wear only on a formal occasion. Moreover, It has two brown lines on its back. I would like to recommend that if you can send it to me, I will appreciate this; I suggest that you can send it by DHL, and I will pay any cost. I look forward to hearing from you; your prompt response is highly appreciated. Should you require any further information, you can contact me; here is the contact number: 555667788. Thanks in advance.
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I
am Ahmed
Karem
, and I am one of your frequent clients. I am writing to you to inform you that I forget items during my stay in your hotel.

Firstly
, I would like to express my satisfaction with my staying in your hotel. I was a guest at your hotel at floor Number 11, Apartment no 222; My booking was from 22 July till 30 July. Unfortunately, after I reached my home, I founded that I forget a piece of cloths which is
really
important
to me; it is a gift from my lovely wife.

let
me
add
this, it is a black leather jacket which can wear
only
on a formal occasion.
Moreover
, It has two brown lines on its back.

I would like to recommend that if you can
send
it to me, I will appreciate this; I suggest that you can
send
it by DHL, and I will pay any cost.

I look forward to hearing from you; your prompt response is
highly
appreciated. Should you require any
further
information, you can contact me; here is the contact number: 555667788. Thanks in advance.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there Write a letter to the hotel manager and say When and where did you stay Describe your clothes What would you like the manager to do about it v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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