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Writing task 1 (a letter)Write a letter to an airline manager to find out about something you forgot on the plane during your travel. In your letter– give details about your flight– describe the item you forgot– explain why it is important that you v.1

Writing task 1 (a letter)Write a letter to an airline manager to find out about something you forgot on the plane during your travel. In your letter– give details about your flight– describe the item you forgot– explain why it is important that you v. 1
Dear Sir/Madam, I am a frequent flyer of British Airlines. I am writing you to inquire about a bag I lost during my last trip to Goa on 15-January on flight number AB220. While off-boarding the flight in Goa I forgot to collect the bag from an overhead bin. I realised about the lost bag after coming out of the airport. So, I raised a request with your staff to recover the bag. After all the formalities, your staff said someone would contact me in 24 hours. My suitcase is Grey Samsonite whose size is 10 x 95 cm. There are 3 stickers on one side and a heart-shaped sticker on the other side. My initials " AR" are also written on both sides. There are a few books and a copy of my thesis in that suitcase, which I need for the conference on 19 August. I would appreciate it if you could contact me as soon as possible. If you could send this suitcase to me by courier service, I would be more grateful. I have arranged to pay for the service. My flight number, luggage claim number and address are written below. Flight Number: MH 168 Luggage Claim Number: 00269 Address: 20 Golden Road, Anand, India. Yours Faithfully, Divya
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a frequent flyer of British Airlines. I am writing you to inquire about a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
I lost during my last trip to Goa on 15-January on flight
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
AB220.

“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
off-boarding the flight in Goa I forgot to collect the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
from an overhead bin. I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
about the lost
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
after coming out of the airport.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I raised a request with your staff to recover the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
.
After all
the formalities, your staff said someone would contact me in 24 hours.

My suitcase is Grey Samsonite whose size is 10
Replace by the typographical symbol.
x
95 cm. There are 3 stickers on one side and a heart-shaped sticker on the other side. My initials
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&quot
;
Possible spelling mistake found.
AR&quot
; are
also
written on both sides. There are a few books and a copy of my thesis in that suitcase, which I need for the conference on 19 August.

I would appreciate it if you could contact me as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible. If you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
this suitcase to me by courier service, I would be more grateful. I have arranged to pay for the service. My flight
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
, luggage claim
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
and address
are written
below.

Flight
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Number
: MH 168

Luggage Claim
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Number
: 00269

Address: 20 Golden Road, Anand, India.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Divya
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter Writing task 1 (a letter)Write a letter to an airline manager to find out about something you forgot on the plane during your travel. In your letter– give details about your flight– describe the item you forgot– explain why it is important that you v. 1

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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