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You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: • Give details of your stay• What were the high & low points of the hotel• What are your suggestions; recommend v.2

You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: • Give details of your stay• What were the high & low points of the hotel• What are your suggestions; recommend v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently stayed in your hotel Park Inn Bangalore, for about a week ago. The outside temperature was quite high during and unfortunately, when I am entered in the hotel room air conditioner was not fully operational. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction and given proposition. Due to this and would like you to take steps so that it does not happen again. I was checked into the hotel at afternoon on 24th July and straightaway went to bed. However, after turning the air conditioner on, I realized that the room was not getting cooler and the room temperature was exceptional high, but the outside view was astonish which was give me some peace and pleasure. I called the hotel staff to solve the problem but they could not do anything and no other room was available at that time. Hence, I decided to stay in this room and open the window so natural air to cool my room. I had to sleep in skimpy clothes, which I don' t and prefer, to over the heat. Noise from the road came through in the open window and my sleep was disrupted again and again. I think it would be a good idea to install the central heating and cooling system and be ready for such arousal issues. A room system for each room along with the central heating and cooling system will be check before the guest come into the room. . Perhaps you would consider giving me a discount if I stay at your hotel next time. Regards, Gaurav Sharma.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I have recently stayed in your
hotel
Park Inn Bangalore, for about a week ago. The outside temperature was quite high during and unfortunately, when I
am entered
in the
hotel
room
air conditioner was not
fully
operational. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction and
given
proposition. Due to this and would like you to take steps
so
that it does not happen again.

I was
checked
into the
hotel
at afternoon on 24th July and straightaway went to bed.
However
, after turning the air conditioner on, I realized that the
room
was not getting cooler and the
room
temperature was exceptional high,
but
the outside view was
astonish
which was give me
some
peace and pleasure.

I called the
hotel
staff to solve the problem
but
they could not do anything and no other
room
was available at that time.
Hence
, I decided to stay in this
room
and open the window
so
natural air to cool my
room
. I had to sleep in skimpy clothes, which I
don&
#039; t and prefer, to over the heat. Noise from the road came through in the open window and my sleep
was disrupted
again and again.

I
think
it would be a
good
idea
to install the central heating and cooling system and be ready for such arousal issues. A
room
system for each
room
along with the central heating and cooling system will be
check
before
the guest
come
into the
room
.
.
Perhaps you would consider giving me a discount if I stay at your
hotel
next
time.

Regards,

Gaurav Sharma.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: • Give details of your stay• What were the high & low points of the hotel• What are your suggestions; recommend v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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