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You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it. v.2

You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it. v. 2
Keylaz: Dear sir, I recently logded at your hotel and i stayed in room number 20. Unfortunately, i forgot my watch in the hotel room which i believe i left on top of the bed. Let me explain my situation in detail, on that fateful day, i received a distress call from my office line so in had to hurriedly packaged my luggage in my bag and left. Therefore, i forget the watch in thr process. The watch is a swiss brand which has a chateruse coloured strap and metal buckle. Furthermore, it has a chronograph. Could you kindly help me find the watch. If found, please kindly give to the receptionist so that when i come back for the conference i will pick it up from her. Thanks for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Ade hki
Keylaz
:

Dear sir,

I recently
logded
at your hotel and
i
stayed in room number 20. Unfortunately,
i
forgot my
watch
in the hotel room which
i
believe
i
left
on top of the bed.

Let
me
explain
my situation in detail, on that fateful day,
i
received a distress call from my office line
so
in had to
hurriedly
packaged my luggage in my bag and
left
.
Therefore
,
i
forget the
watch
in
thr
process.

The
watch
is a
swiss
brand which has a
chateruse
coloured
strap and metal buckle.
Furthermore
, it has a chronograph.

Could you kindly
help
me find the
watch
. If found,
please
kindly give to the receptionist
so
that when
i
come
back for the conference
i
will pick it up from her.

Thanks for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ade
hki
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS letter You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it. v. 2

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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