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You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it. v.2

You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it. v. 2

Keylaz: Dear sir, I recently logded at your hotel and i stayed in room number 20. Unfortunately, i forgot my watch in the hotel room which i believe i left on top of the bed. Let me explain my situation in detail, on that fateful day, i received a distress call from my office line so in had to hurriedly packaged my luggage in my bag and left. Therefore, i forget the watch in thr process. The watch is a swiss brand which has a chateruse coloured strap and metal buckle. Furthermore, it has a chronograph. Could you kindly help me find the watch. If found, please kindly give to the receptionist so that when i come back for the conference i will pick it up from her. Thanks for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Ade hki

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Dear sir,

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Thanks for your consideration.

Yours faithfully
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3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS letter You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it. v. 2

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American English

9 paragraphs

135 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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