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You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it. v.2

You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it. v. 2
Keylaz: Dear sir, I recently logded at your hotel and i stayed in room number 20. Unfortunately, i forgot my watch in the hotel room which i believe i left on top of the bed. Let me explain my situation in detail, on that fateful day, i received a distress call from my office line so in had to hurriedly packaged my luggage in my bag and left. Therefore, i forget the watch in thr process. The watch is a swiss brand which has a chateruse coloured strap and metal buckle. Furthermore, it has a chronograph. Could you kindly help me find the watch. If found, please kindly give to the receptionist so that when i come back for the conference i will pick it up from her. Thanks for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Ade hki
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Keylaz
:

Dear sir,

I recently
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logded
at your hotel and
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i
stayed in room number 20. Unfortunately,
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i
forgot my
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watch
in the hotel room which
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i
believe
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i
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left
on top of the bed.

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me
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explain
my situation in detail, on that fateful day,
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i
received a distress call from my office line
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so
in had to
hurriedly
packaged my luggage in my bag and
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left
.
Therefore
,
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i
forget the
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watch
in
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thr
process.

The
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watch
is a
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swiss
brand which has a
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chateruse
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coloured
strap and metal buckle.
Furthermore
, it has a chronograph.

Could you kindly
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help
me find the
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watch
. If found,
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please
kindly give to the receptionist
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so
that when
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i
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come
back for the conference
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i
will pick it up from her.

Thanks for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ade
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hki
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes
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IELTS letter You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it. v. 2

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  American English
9 paragraphs
135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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