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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so importantTell the mana v.7

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so importantTell the mana v. 7
Dear Sir, I’ve visited your hotel two days ago, I had a business meeting there. Now I’ve come home in Ukraine and realized that I left a file with my papers in your hotel. There is no doubt I left it there, because they were put on the table of the lounge which located on the second floor of the hotel. I remember I forgot to put them into my case. Please, take a serious my problem, as these documents are very important for me. There private information about my bank accounts and transactions I’ve done for the last two years. So if I don’t receive my files, I will block all my credit cards and get a lot of headache to recover everything. I want you to go to the lounge to check me documents. If they are missed, could you please ask your staff about them? For example, cleaner could put them away while he or she were cleaning that room. Thank you in advance for considering my problem, I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Kind regards, James Olson
Dear Sir,

I’ve visited your hotel two days ago, I had a business meeting there.
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Now
I’ve
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
home in Ukraine and realized that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
a file with my papers in your hotel. There is no doubt I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
it there,
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because
they
were put
on the table of the lounge which located on the second floor of the hotel. I remember I forgot to put them into my case.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
, take a serious my problem, as these documents are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for me. There private information about my bank accounts and transactions I’ve done for the last two years.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
if I don’t receive my files, I will block all my credit cards and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
headache to recover everything.

I want you to go to the lounge to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
me documents. If they
are missed
, could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
ask your staff about them?
For example
, cleaner could put them away while he or she were cleaning that room.

Thank you in advance for considering my problem, I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards,

James Olson
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so importantTell the mana v. 7

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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