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ou recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so importantTell the manag v.2

ou recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so importantTell the manag v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in connection with the meeting I attended which organized by company at your hotel on Oct 1st, 2019. I had left some confidential papers at your hotel and need your assistance to secure them till I come and collect personally. Let me explain the situation in more detail. I found that some document was missing once I reached home. This is the desk number ' EC' assigned to me for this meeting and the document should available inside the drawer. These are highly secured document, it has information about our contract with clients on upcoming projects for the next financial year. Additionally, at any moment this should not leaked to our competitors. My organization is your hospitality partner for last 6 years and many important meetings have been held in your hotel and our relationship will continue for coming years. I hope you have understood the seriousness of this document. So, please go to the meeting hall and get the document from the desk immediately and keep in a secured place. I will visit your hotel to collect the papers personally. Thank you for the support. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Regards, Sreenivas
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in connection with the
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meeting
I attended which organized by
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company
at your
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hotel
on Oct 1st, 2019. I had
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left
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some
confidential papers at your
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hotel
and need your assistance to secure them till I
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come
and collect
personally
.

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Let
me
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explain
the situation in more detail. I found that
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some
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document
was missing once I reached home. This is the desk number '
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EC&
#039; assigned to me for this
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meeting
and the
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document
should available inside the drawer. These are
highly
secured
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document
, it has information about our contract with clients on upcoming projects for the
next
financial year.
Additionally
, at any moment this should not
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "leak"
leaked
to our competitors. My organization is your hospitality partner for last 6 years and
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many
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important
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meetings
have
been held
in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
and our relationship will continue for coming years. I hope you have understood the seriousness of this
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document
.
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So
,
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please
go to the
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meeting
hall and
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get
the
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document
from the desk immediately and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
in a secured place. I will visit your
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hotel
to collect the papers
personally
. Thank you for the support.

Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Regards,

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Sreenivas
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter ou recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so importantTell the manag v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
201 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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