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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. -Thank you friend for the holiday-Explain that you left your wallet in their house-Give them v.5

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. -Thank you friend for the holiday-Explain that you left your wallet in their house-Give them v. 5
Dear Brown Dive, Hope, you are doing good. First of all, I thank you for an astonishing events during our holiday trip. It was a splendid moments that I never forget in my life. Unfortunately, when I arrived my home and I come to realize that I forgot my purse in your home. I have my national identity card, ATM cards, driving license, etc. in my purse. It is very essential for me in day to day life. So please try your best and comfortable time to send my purse as soon as possible through courier. Especially local courier service will not take responsibility for these important cards. So I kindly request you to send through DHL or aramex courier. It is professional and hope to receive the wallet soon. Please send the billing reference number of courier as text message to my mobile. So that most probably, I collect it from the office itself. I am expecting my purse within next week. Advance thanks for helping me in this regard.
Dear Brown Dive,

Hope, you are doing
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good
.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I thank you for an astonishing
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "event"?
events
during our holiday trip. It was a splendid
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "moment"?
moments
that I never forget in my life.

Unfortunately, when I arrived my home and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to realize that I forgot my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
purse
in your home. I have my national identity card, ATM cards, driving license, etc. in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
purse
. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
essential for me in day to day life.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
try your best and comfortable time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
purse
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible through courier.
Especially
local courier service will not take responsibility for these
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
cards.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I kindly request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
through DHL or
Possible spelling mistake found.
aramex
courier. It is professional and hope to receive the wallet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
the billing reference number of courier as text message to my mobile.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that most
probably
, I collect it from the office itself.

I am expecting my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
purse
within
next
week. Advance thanks for helping me in this regard.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. -Thank you friend for the holiday-Explain that you left your wallet in their house-Give them v. 5

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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