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Although you have never formally studied computing you have always been interested in computers You have just read about a computer course that really interests you but it is only for people who have complete v. 1

Dear Sir, I am writing this to request you to accept my enrollment in the computer course you are organising. From many days I am planning to join in a computer training center, but could not be done because of my busy schedule in different activities. During day time I have to rush to my college and after that I will take tuitions to kids at my residence and also at night I will be going for part-time job. because of this routine till now I am not able to learn minimum basics of computers. I came to notice that you are going to teach the students who has completed their elementary course but I request to allow me to your classes as I was very enthusiastic to learn this and if you accept me I will adjust my schedule, as learning this is most important to me. Please make me an exception to enter in learning the computer course so that I will enroll myself in the course. I will be waiting to hear from you soon. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Abc

IELTS letter You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Although you have never formally studied computing you have always been interested in computers You have just read about a computer course that really interests you but it is only for people who have complete v.1

Dear Sir, I am writing this to request you to accept my enrollment in the computer course you are
organising
. From
many
days I am planning to
join
in a computer training center,
but
could not
be done
because
of my busy schedule in
different
activities. During day time I
have to
rush to my college and after that I will take
tuitions
to kids at my residence and
also
at night I will be going for part-time job.
because
of this routine till
now
I am not able to learn minimum basics of computers. I came to notice that you are going to teach the students who
has
completed their elementary course
but
I request to
allow
me to your classes as I was
very
enthusiastic to learn this and if you accept me I will adjust my schedule, as learning this is most
important
to me.
Please
make
me an exception to enter in learning the computer course
so
that I will enroll myself in the course. I will be waiting to hear from you
soon
. Thanking you. Yours
sincerely
,
Abc
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
Letter
5 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≥ 7
  • Band score ≤ 6
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