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Question Your Friend bought the tickets for the theatre for both of you Write a letter to your friend you cannot go to the theatre In your letter Apologize Explain the situation Tell him what he can do with the extra tickets v.2

Question Your Friend bought the tickets for the theatre for both of you Write a letter to your friend you cannot go to the theatre In your letter Apologize Explain the situation Tell him what he can do with the extra tickets v. 2
Dear Amit, I hope you are doing well! I am writing a letter to inform you, at the last week we had planned for the watch the drama. However, you had purchased the tickets online and reserved the front seat for the better view of drama performance. Firstly, I would like to beg the pardon for the inconvenience not spectating the drama because of the certain issue or reason. I hope you will be no more upset with after the letting knows my situation. Explaining the situation further, my mother has been suffering from a diabetic disease chronically for two days. Hence, I need to check-up for her at a nearby hospital which is very essential and inevitable for me. This is the main reason, I have to be cancelled the plan not to enjoy the dramatic environment. Nonetheless, I do not want to waste our money, if someone is ready to buy tickets from us. It might be your friend or family member. Thus, wastage of money will not be anymore and this could be worthwhile. I look forward to replying at your earliest convenience. Thanks in advance. Your' s Sincerely Jaspreet Kaur
Dear Amit,

I hope you are doing well! I am writing a letter to inform you, at the last week we had planned for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
the drama.
However
, you had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
the tickets online and reserved the front seat for the better view of drama performance.

Firstly
, I would like to beg the pardon for the inconvenience not spectating the drama
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the certain issue or reason. I hope you will be no more upset with after the letting knows my situation.

Explaining the situation
further
, my mother has been suffering from a diabetic disease
chronically
for two days.
Hence
, I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
-up for her at a nearby hospital which is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
essential and inevitable for me. This is the main reason, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
be cancelled
the plan not to enjoy the dramatic environment.

Nonetheless, I do not want to waste our money, if someone is ready to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
tickets from us. It might be your friend or family member.
Thus
, wastage of money will not be anymore and this could be worthwhile. I look forward to replying at your earliest convenience.

Thanks in advance.

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0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter Question Your Friend bought the tickets for the theatre for both of you Write a letter to your friend you cannot go to the theatre In your letter Apologize Explain the situation Tell him what he can do with the extra tickets v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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