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You have recently studied in another country but had to leave the course in between and return back to your country. Write a letter to the course administrator-Thank him/her for assisting you with enrolling into this course. Explain him/her why you had to l v.2

You have recently studied in another country but had to leave the course in between and return back to your country. Write a letter to the course administrator-Thank him/her for assisting you with enrolling into this course. Explain him/her why you had to l v. 2
Dear Mr. James, I am Jackson Simpson from the September 2018 batch of Data Science. I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance provided for choosing an informative course as well as enrolling in time. Moreover, your suggestion to apply for financial aid was a big help since I am a foreign student. I am afraid, I will not be able to pursue the program any further due to unforeseen circumstances at personal level and will have to leave at the earliest for my country. Last Tuesday, I received an email from my family mentioned, wherein he mentioned that my mother in at stage IV Parkinson' s meaning which, she needs immediate and full time attention. As it is only me and mother in the family, I would like to spend the rest of time with her taking after her needs and being an emotional support. I thoroughly enjoyed the interactive sessions and the capstone projects during the executive programs; this teaching style built a strong foundation for data science. Last but no the least, I would like to appreciate the innovative teaching methods of our professor, Mr. Jeffery. Additionally, I made some real good friends while at the campus. If conditions permit, I would definitely like to resume the classes. Let me know if there are any options to continue the course. Looking forward for your response. Your' s sincerely, Jackson Simpson
Dear Mr. James,

I am Jackson Simpson from the September 2018 batch of Data Science. I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance provided for choosing an informative course
as well
as enrolling in time.
Moreover
, your suggestion to apply for financial aid was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
since I am a foreign student.

I am afraid, I will not be able to pursue the program any
further
due to unforeseen circumstances at personal level and will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
at the earliest for my country. Last Tuesday, I received an email from my family mentioned, wherein he mentioned that my mother in at stage IV
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Parkinson&
#039; s meaning which, she needs immediate and full time attention. As it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
me and mother in the family, I would like to spend the rest of time with her taking after her needs and being an emotional support.

I
thoroughly
enjoyed the interactive sessions and the capstone projects during the executive programs; this teaching style built a strong foundation for data science. Last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
no
the least, I would like to appreciate the innovative teaching methods of our professor, Mr. Jeffery.
Additionally
, I made
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
real
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
friends while at the campus.

If conditions permit, I would definitely like to resume the classes.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know if there are any options to continue the course. Looking forward for your response.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Your&
#039; s
sincerely
,

Jackson Simpson
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You have recently studied in another country but had to leave the course in between and return back to your country. Write a letter to the course administrator-Thank him/her for assisting you with enrolling into this course. Explain him/her why you had to l v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
235 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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