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Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline: -Where and when you lost your bag-What your bag looks like-What it is contents were v.2

Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline: -Where and when you lost your bag-What your bag looks like-What it is contents were v. 2
To Whom It May Concern: I am writing to inform you that I forgot to take my bag from the airplane. I am Amir Nazaripoor and I flew from New York to Paris destination last Tuesday on 12th of July with fly number NY315 of Paris airline. Unfortunately, when I leave airport I understood that I forgot my handbag in airplane. I should mention that I sat on B14 seat. Our flight was flown with two hours’ delay and due to this subject I lost my concentration and really forgot to take my bag. I put my stuff on dashboard which located above my seat. It is made by lather and has black color with two semicircle handle and three zips on it. In addition, it is not big and has rectangular shape and also you can see a silver color metal plate which was written the brand of bag on it. The content of my bag are a few paper, my phone charger, a book and some pen and pencil. I ask you that please help me to find my handbag. If you need more information about me or my bag. Please call me by number 9876543210 or send me email by email@gmail. com. Your prompt response would be highly appreciated. Faithfully yours,
To Whom It May Concern:

I am writing to inform you that I forgot to take my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
from the airplane. I am Amir
Possible spelling mistake found.
Nazaripoor
and I flew from New York to Paris destination last Tuesday on 12th of July with
fly
number NY315 of Paris airline. Unfortunately, when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
airport I understood that I forgot my handbag in airplane. I should mention that I sat on B14 seat. Our flight
was flown
with two hours’ delay and due to this subject I lost my concentration and
really
forgot to take my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
. I put my stuff on dashboard which located above my seat. It
is made
by lather and has black color with two semicircle
Possible agreement error. The noun 'handle' seems to be countable, so consider using: "handles".
handle
and three zips on it.
In addition
, it is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
and has rectangular shape and
also
you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
a silver color metal plate which
was written
the brand of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
on it. The content of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
are a few paper, my phone charger, a book and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
pen and pencil. I ask you that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help me find"?
help me to find
my handbag. If you need more information about me or my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
call me by number 9876543210 or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me email by
Possible spelling mistake found.
email@gmail
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
.

Your prompt response would be
highly
appreciated.

Faithfully
yours,
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline: -Where and when you lost your bag-What your bag looks like-What it is contents were v. 2

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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