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Although you have more interest in computers you are not able to get enrolled in a computing and statistics course as an elementary course is mandatory for enrollment Write a letter to the enrollment officer describe why you are writing explain your circu v.2

Although you have more interest in computers you are not able to get enrolled in a computing and statistics course as an elementary course is mandatory for enrollment Write a letter to the enrollment officer describe why you are writing explain your circu v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest on a course offered by your institution. I read about the course on a pamphlet issued by your start for which a basic course' s completion certificate is mandatory. I have not completed any course about computing till now. But I would like to gain knowledge about computing and statistics. Though i did not finish an elementary course, I have many certificates which i have obtained in my lower classes and these certificates vindicate my knowledge in computing. Despite i studied in a remote village in my home country, I have acquired much information about computers both in theoretical as well as in practical aspects. I very well know that an elementary course outweighs the certificates and knowledge i have gained. The course offered by your organisation may seek a job for me in my future. Would you please exempt me from completing a preliminary course? Perhaps, this will fetch me an admission for the computer class. If you offer me an enrollment for the course, it would be of great help to improve my career. Looking forward to accept my excuse. Thank you for the consideration. Yours faithfully, Gayathri Mohandas.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest on a
course
offered by your institution. I read about the
course
on a pamphlet issued by your
start
for which a basic
course&
#039; s completion
certificate
is mandatory.

I
have not completed any
course
about computing till
now
.
But
I would like to gain knowledge about computing and statistics. Though
i
did not finish an elementary
course
, I have
many
certificates
which
i
have obtained in my lower classes and these
certificates
vindicate my knowledge in computing.

Despite
i
studied in a remote village in my home country, I have acquired much information about computers both in theoretical
as well as
in practical aspects. I
very
well know that an elementary
course
outweighs the
certificates
and knowledge
i
have gained. The
course
offered by your
organisation
may seek a job for me in my future.

Would you
please
exempt me from completing a preliminary
course
? Perhaps, this will fetch me an admission for the computer
class
. If you offer me an enrollment for the
course
, it would be of great
help
to
improve
my career.

Looking forward
to accept
my excuse. Thank you for the consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Gayathri
Mohandas
.
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13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes
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IELTS letter Although you have more interest in computers you are not able to get enrolled in a computing and statistics course as an elementary course is mandatory for enrollment Write a letter to the enrollment officer describe why you are writing explain your circu v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resources: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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