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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have compl v.40

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have compl v. 40
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to register the desirable computer program which I have been waiting for. It was my dream to get professional knowledge of computer. As the advertisement mentioned, the program is only suitable for pre-educated people about computer. However, I have learned about computer on my own, since I was 12 years old. Frankly, I am quiet good at some skills; video editing, reading computer words and searching high quality information. So, if you allow me an opportunity to enroll, I will catch up everything perfectly. Even though, the ads was written about tiny condition of limitation to enter, it will be worth experience in my future. If it is impossible, could you please let me know other programs I can do? I will terribly appreciate all your assistance this matter. Best regards, MJ
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to register the desirable computer program which I have been waiting for. It was my dream to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
professional knowledge of computer.

As the advertisement mentioned, the program is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
suitable for
Possible spelling mistake found.
pre-educated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
about computer.
However
, I have learned about computer on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
, since I was 12 years
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old
.
Frankly
, I am quiet
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
at
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
; video editing, reading computer words and searching high quality information.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me an opportunity to enroll, I will catch up everything
perfectly
.
Even though
, the ads
was written
about tiny condition of limitation to enter, it will be worth experience in my future. If it is impossible, could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know other programs I can do?

I will
terribly
appreciate all your assistance this matter.

Best regards,

MJ
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have compl v. 40

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  American English
7 paragraphs
138 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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