Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to the advertisement published last week in the local newspaper offering a shop assistant job in the City Museum.
I am a twenty-four-year-old student, who is currently studying a degree in English at the University of Cambridge. I will complete my syllabus next June and I would like to have some hands-on experience before applying for a steady job.
I have some past experience working in places like restaurants and shops, which implied some of the skills that are considered to be useful in dealing with customers face-to-face, as it is required in the job offered. I am tranquil, effective, committed and extremely polite. Furthermore, not only can I speak English fluently, I also can speak French and German without hesitation. All this information is available in the CV attached.
I would be very grateful if you could consider this application because it would be a great opportunity to practice my language skills as well as acquire experience in the museums world, which I find utterly interesting.
I hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Enrique González Díaz.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to the advertisement published last week in the local newspaper offering a shop assistant job in the City Museum.
I am a twenty-four-year-
old
student, who is
currently
studying a degree in English at the University of Cambridge.
I
will complete my syllabus
next
June and I would like to have
some
hands-on experience
before
applying for a steady job.
I
have
some
past experience
working in places like restaurants and shops, which implied
some of the
skills
that
are considered
to be useful in dealing with customers face-to-face, as it
is required
in the job offered.
I
am tranquil, effective, committed and
extremely
polite.
Furthermore
, not
only
can I speak English
fluently
, I
also
can speak French and German without hesitation. All this information is available in the CV attached.
I would be
very
grateful if you could consider this application
because
it would be a great opportunity to practice my language
skills
as well
as acquire experience in the museums world, which I find
utterly
interesting.
I hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours
faithfully
,
Enrique González Díaz.
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